Ma said, “Play nice with your brothers”… (poem) by Ed Matlack on AuthorsDen

Ma said, “Play nice with your brothers”…
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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...Let the games begin...

Its been quite awhile, Passed has as well been sometime, Since last an ancient Ed’s war has occurred in rhyme… Edvard(k) needs to get his blood boilin’, Its good for his heart to get it pumpin’, So what do ya think, should us Ed’s start a friendly toilin’… Edju is all ready to from us run, Towards he will go to the setting sun, What a chicken chit he is in the form of a bum… Jersey Devil Ed has his fingers on the keys & steady, Lookin’ for a fight is he, more so than George & Eddie, Before you old farts can start, you can see I AM AT THE READY… Thanks Ma, you are the best, For giving to us to fight your permission, I will try not to be too harsh, but my arsenal is already packed with ammunition… © ed ;-) 6/10/09

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

Boys will be boys.

Ron

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on June 10, 2009

Now boys...sticks and stones..

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Well I'm just gonna sit back and watch like a good sis and may you all three shoot yourselves where it hurts most! ma and me are tired of your old antics!Don't come cryin to us when you get wounded...

tiger lily

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

nice bullets Ed, you're a comical person and brave to boot, just don't shoot, that is unless someone is after your loot

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Am I gonna have to turn around and separate you three?!? LOL Well done, Ed, always the instigator!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Okay that's it boys if ya going to fight do it like my Daddy always made me and my brothers settle things with boxing gloves...the second choice he gave us was grenades he brought back from the war but normally we'd go with the gloves.

Fee

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Nothing like good ole feud, especially a family feud!
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Ray { The Great Canadian Buzzard }

Be careful I don't want to get caught in the cross fire
You know your eyes may not see as straight as they used to :)
The Buzzard

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

You are chicken shit brother using foul language, Ma has a new steel brush, and PeeWee is right, you have "unloaded" all that shit of yours! and we don't shot unarmed fools.

Edvard(k) the princely Ole Brother

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Ho, Ho, Ho! So I'm a chicken chit in the form of a bum - did my wife tell you that??!! She's still mad about Snake Island. And I hear while I'm headin for the woods, yer goin to a Baby Shower!! (How many is that now, Bro??!!)

PS You may not want to start an Ancient Ed War right now; Rufuz says you just unloaded your Fart Gun - and yer out of ammo!

Ho, Ho, Ho!!