What’s the world coming too when a fight with brothers ya can’t start, (poem) by Ed Matlack on AuthorsDen

What’s the world coming too when a fight with brothers ya can’t start,
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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Come on guys, Ma said to have at it, Pick on your brothers & fight, fight, fight, Wasn’t hard at one time, the other two are gettin’ old, Maybe if I on eBay got their precious cars sold… Yeah, that would start a war, Course no one would want P-wee’s exploder wreck, They weren’t well built when new & by now its on its way to heck, The old farts Volvo is nothing but a differently badged Ford Taurus, I can’t believe that PW takes that wreck into the forests, And Volvo technology is as old as a brontosaurus named Doris… If this doesn’t start a bruhaha, Then nothing in the world will, Picking on a mans car is the worst, As we all know a Volvo is nothing but an old mans hearse, And as for P-wee’s Exploder, he’d be better off fueling it with knockwurst… ©ed ;-) 6/10/09

Reviewed by Tom poesyco.th@gmail.com

Reviewed on June 13, 2009

NOW - NOW -

FIGHT NICE - KIDDIES!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 11, 2009

Oh oh, sounds like fighting words to me...lol

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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

As I told Edvard, you guys have such a unique relationship. I'm watching Rufus during this bruhaha. He said no eyeball gouging and no kicking in the balls, otherwise he's gonna get pissed.

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Hi Ed, I think you done gone and did it! You lit that spark in your bro's pens, and they're scheming now... plotting... and I'm waiting for the retaliation.... LOL....

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

I have faith in you Ed that you will find a way lol!!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

You better read the news, Bro. Of the so called 'Big Three' auto makers, Ford's the only one not going 'belly up.'

If I'm still alive in 20 years, and they haven't taken my driver's license away yet, I'll probably still be drivin my reliable old Exploder up into the woods - what's left of them anyway. And I'll still be able to get good old American parts for her.

By the way, part of Chrysler/Jeep's bankruptcy deal is that all their spare parts will now be made in China - much cheaper (Jeeper) labor!!!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Who's talking! a fetid swamp rattlesnake from smelly Jersey State that lives in a rotten East German Trabant Spy Mobile!
You gonna be surprised when, unexpectedly, our fight bites your ass!

EDvard(k) #&!.+$** Ole Brother

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on June 10, 2009

Uh oh, it sure sounds like there is a brawl a brewin...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Picking on a man's car is the worst
Unless you are specifically versed
In the something few own
That are even below
The two that you rail on
The pathetic Yugo

Reviewed by Ray { The Great Canadian Buzzard }

Still stirring the pot I see
Keep your head down LOL
Great write and good luck
The Buzzard