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Villanelle: The Dilemma of the Non-Violent - 18
by T. Wignesan → (All Poetry by T. Wignesan)
Tuesday, May 24, 2022    Rated "G" by the Author.
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Boosting ego is the craft of violence
Insecure feelings drive muscle-man jaws
He who abstains from doing harm commits offence


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Villanelle : The Dilemma of the Non-Violent – 18

World in which is ingrained innate violence
Where nation-States all hell-bent on blitz wars
He who abstains from doing harm commits offence

Is branded traitor parasite perched on fence
On conscientious objector shine no stars
World in which is ingrained innate violence

Even cowards by nature obtain licence
To kill at will armed to the teeth in holy wars
He who abstains from doing harm commits offence

The non-violent sport no medals bright dense
Nor do they rape their loved ones inflicting scars
World in which is ingrained innate violence

Boosting ego is the craft of violence
Insecure feelings drive muscle-man jaws
He who abstains from doing harm commits offence

Do no harm and attain pure inner silence
Resort to arms let rage Raskolnikov indoors
World in which is ingrained innate violence
He who abstains from doing harm commits offence

© T. Wignesan – Paris, Posted on PS.com site: 2015

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 Reviews of "Villanelle: The Dilemma of the Non-Violent - 18"
Reviewed by T. Wignesan
Reviewed on May 25, 2022
Good Lord! Senor Don Ron! You're over-doing Thyself in this vitriolic commentary. Hurra! You have rendered homage to India's Father of Independence, but, might I say, if only you had added the syllable after Gandhi's name thus: Gandhi-Ji/Gandhiji, Indians all over the world would love you for it. Why? Because it's the honorific address or reference of respect for a dearly-loved Soul in Hindu terms.In the circumstances, I think you should go without food,fun or drink for at least another two or three months...Secondly, Gandhiji not only went about affronting the British Raj "bare-chested" as you well put it, but - here is the lapse - nearly "bare-foot" as well. Just imagine slopping through all the accumulated filth in towns and villages without sewer-systems in his slippers and sandals.Thirdly, on the Brahmacharya (sexual abstinence) front, he did slip up a bit now and then. Finally, he committed troops (186,000 ?) to WWII efforts in Europe in exchange for the promise of Independence after the War.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 25, 2022
This poem says a lot about our innate pleasure in supporting military aggression and calling it, defense. Aggressive countries like Russia, now committing blitzkrieg war against Ukraine finding the obsolete strategy is backfiring in their face. Back home, all of those old men with their chests heavy with medals from past campaigns. Where they conveniently and cowardly stayed back behind the front lines and directed youngsters into the gristmill of combat.

But conscientious objectors as bare chested as Gandhi, win more wars without any medals except, perhaps the Nobel Peace Prize. Created by a man who developed dynamite and then finding out that his invention was most prized by war makers, distancing the battle from hand to hand, eye to eye, and making it no longer, a simply, the macho sport for kings.

Ron


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