You are more than you'll ever know
And your love teaches me to grow
You are more than my everything
And your love gives me wings
Like a butterfly
And I'll dance in the sunlight
Like a butterfly
From the day into the night
This says it all (nature and beauty; softness, color, light and life), in but a short space. I love the way that you can take a form and make it speak to us. Would love to see you try some sonnets and other forms. -- Jeff
My favorite butterly are the fairy-like lavendar ones I find on the moss, in groups, nearNCorbin Ctrrk in North Georgia.
You brought back some very fond memories. Thanks Taylor.
Love,
Susan
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2007
Taylor this is precious this write, Well done, holly
It is always an indeed pleasure to read such fine well written artistic worksuch as this. I admire your strength and ability to put this together so with that said just write on poet.
Beautifully conceived and delightfully written Dear Taylor. The picture and words compliment one another perfectly, which is a given considering who the author is. Well done Blueberry!
Such tender words appredciating beauty and the brevity of life.
Yes, you do the ku... very well, Dear Friend. What words could I use to enhance those you and your benefactor have chosen?
A Goodun' - Bill
super write/love that 'lavender spires' image. way to go
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2007
Dear Taylor, the quotation is beautiful and captivating; your Haiku
-divine. I love the butterfly picture too. It fits your Haiku perfectly. I think you should write more in this lovely form. You have a special gift for writing Haiku; thanks for sharing this one with us!
~Butch
Explore the mystery of how nature makes unexpected gifts of creative wonders to an unsuspecting caregiver one late night and early morning in southeastern Georgia, USA.
Peace,
Joselyn
love, Myrna
Amor
Regis
Sandie Angel :o)
Love,
Eileen
Love,
CJ
Very beautiful and inspiring Haiku.
You brought back some very fond memories. Thanks Taylor.
Love,
Susan
Nicely done...thank you
Dan
Light and Wisdom ...
Love Tinka
Yes, you do the ku... very well, Dear Friend. What words could I use to enhance those you and your benefactor have chosen?
A Goodun' - Bill
-divine. I love the butterfly picture too. It fits your Haiku perfectly. I think you should write more in this lovely form. You have a special gift for writing Haiku; thanks for sharing this one with us!
~Butch