humanity's imprint upon this world ain't nothin' nice ... you give that reality a face through the stark choices of this poem. freedom in opposition to egocentrism gone awry. well done, poet.
All people should be free to be who they are. If we love them, we should accept all of them and not just the parts that please us. Excellent, insightful poem, Ron.
Take care,
Sherry
Okay here we go "Ron"...you are free...to go...but come back soon...with another poem!!
Love Tinka
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2005
I found levels of truth here, Ron... a cry for every creature to be left to what he/she is, does. Humans learn, listen, find happiness when they feel they are not censored, not judged, not controlled in any way.
At the end, I kept hearing the voices of women who say "I'd love to go but my husband won't let me" or "doesn't like me to go out"... it isn't about the husband, it's about allowing someone to live our lives for us.
What you have written will be in my library... it is part of my own life credo. Great piece! katy xox
Explore the mystery of how nature makes unexpected gifts of creative wonders to an unsuspecting caregiver one late night and early morning in southeastern Georgia, USA.
Great poem, ol' boy!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(
I am Rufuz, in this heat leave me be,
In the air conditioning down near the sea...RUFUZ & ed
Reindeer
Take care,
Sherry
Okay here we go "Ron"...you are free...to go...but come back soon...with another poem!!
Love Tinka
At the end, I kept hearing the voices of women who say "I'd love to go but my husband won't let me" or "doesn't like me to go out"... it isn't about the husband, it's about allowing someone to live our lives for us.
What you have written will be in my library... it is part of my own life credo. Great piece! katy xox
Eileen
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
God bless,
Sandie.
"Let Me Free" sings for justice... A beautiful composition
and responsible message. A compliance with Nature and Poetry.
Thank You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU