This is an awesome write, Ronald. You capture the intensity of a Spring Storm, mixed with a little trepidation, and much awe in these effective lines. And that photo -- WOW. Well done. Glad Kate Clifford sent me here. =]
I hope Karla drops by to see this photo! :-) Good description of a spring storm and that one looks like it was one that would take a person on one heck of a ride!
Reviewed by Gerald Zollar (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2010
Took me back to Tulsa last year.
Took me further back to Chicago many spring storms.
Enjoyable.
The wonder of the earth and its delightful aroma after the storm is gone...It is as if she has regained her composure and sweet disposition once more... A fine description of Natures fury..
Man, this is a #10! What a fine poem, and I'm down right jealous, being a weather nut! You've got Stormspinner beat. Just makes me wish I could be there for one. Is the pic by you? Terrific--We just don't seem to get 'em here like that north of Ocala, like today, just a dribbly cold rain and overcast but the thunders popping further south. I need a new style of poetry. Wonderful...
Mike
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(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Took me further back to Chicago many spring storms.
Enjoyable.
This is one of your best. Enjoyed this alot.
blessings ...
richard
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony
Wow, sounds like a nasty thing! I love the way you described this storm.
Mary
Mike