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Hot Sun In The Omani Mountains
© Andreas B. Otte

For all the sun lovers...


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The steam rises,
from the new fallen rain.
But not enough to quench,
the fires on the plain.

Not enough to quench,
my dry thirst again,
so parched by you.

I dream of the days,
when the cool winds blew.
Those days are gone,
and so should my hots for you.

Evaporated in the heat of the mist,
gone like a dinosaur's hiss,
gone like your burning kiss... Gone.

In the dawn of your midst,
you rise languid and list,
Twix the triangle of thighs,
and thoughts of our bliss.

Your torturous path,
to zenith on high.
No shade can be found,
as hours tick, dragging by.

Our sweat beads as one,
and reaches new highs,
on the salty forehead of fun,
as the last of the day dies.

In the crimson sun,
that is you on the run.

Copyright 2011 © Ronald W. Hull

7/22/11

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 Reviews of "Hot"
Reviewed on October 1, 2011
Wonderful metaphor, extremely intense and consuming, like fire. Title fits really well!

Reviewed on August 17, 2011
Thoughts that keep the soul alive in the desert. Well penned Ron.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 10, 2011
Thank you for sharing this meaningful metaphorical write, Ron. I am quite certain many can relate to the theme you have shared through your verses here. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on July 27, 2011
Ronald,
Good reading!

Blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 25, 2011
good poem, Ron ... lots of hot imagery & rhyme ...

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on July 25, 2011
Hot and steamy writing, Ron.....well done!

Anna

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 24, 2011
You've made a perfect metaphor for a hot steamy love affair from the suns arc across the sky on a day with demon heat Ron. "Your tortuous path, to zenith on high" is a perfect picture. "Twix the triangle of thighs and thoughts of our bliss". Until she runs silhouetted in "the crimson sun, on the run". There are many killer stanzas to die for here Ron. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on July 24, 2011
Deeply evocative poem, wonderfully intimate in tone!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 24, 2011
I heard you guys in Texas were really tough...so a little heat & lack of water can't hurt tough guys...;-) e


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