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The Musty Stench of Rhyme
by Rusty Daily → (All Poetry by Rusty Daily)
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This was written in response to a gentleman who said rhyming poetry had the 'musty stench of its ancestors.


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I’m sure it is fated
that I am outdated
my work has a musty stench

This meter and rhyme
is way past its time
its author a bygone mensch

The old fashioned way
is cliché and passé
prose is considered the rage

Free form, it is clear
has driven a spear
through rhyme like an ossifrage

Though my verse isn’t free
don’t worry about me
my meter will tick-tock along

I’ll ferment my old rhyme
in my own paradigm
like fruit of the scuppernong



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 Reviews of "The Musty Stench of Rhyme"
Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on October 9, 2006
Long live rhymers
and
Meter climbers

I love rhyme.

great poem

Reviewed on October 9, 2006
It's delightful, its delovely
Your rhyme is ever so comely.

So just keep bringin' 'em on, Rusty.

Micke
(ossifrage? scuppernong? Had ta look up them thar words in me dictionary :o)


Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on October 9, 2006
You tell 'em, Rusty-friend. With poetry like you write, rhyming is definitely NOT an issue! You are talented in every genre, in every style -- and in rhyme or no rhyme! What jerks ... to say something like that in the first place (she says as she's sticking out her tongue).
Excellent poem!!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 9, 2006
Keep on writing ...not worth fighting...phrases in phases... :)

Love Tinka

Reviewed on October 9, 2006
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As long as the work is written with verses, whether they are FREE ~ with or without rhyme; ~ BLANK or RHYMED-METERED, what counts is that it is within the poetic art, MAJOR or MANOR.

I have enjoyed the reading of "The Musty Stench of Rhyme".

Healthy long creative life, Poet.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on October 9, 2006
you keep on rhyming, mister~~ more power to you! it's an art that I have yet to master...in fact, you can read in my blog from a few days ago of just how horrific my rhyming skills are! (:

Susan

Reviewed on October 9, 2006
Rhymes and meters will never lose its place in poetry; although nowadays many prefer free forms that are powerfully-expressive.

I like to read them both!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on October 9, 2006
Very good!!! I do mostly free verse BUT only because most publishers want only free verse. I have been published many times in the last 1 1/2 yrs. and it still amazes me what turns on a publisher. I like this, it was smart and extrememly well written. CJ was right...your a great poet!!

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on October 9, 2006
Rusty - How the hell did you ever get that nickname? Of all those on AD, you'd be the last called, "Rusty." No better example than this posting... full of sassy proof that poetry is poetry is poetry, and never the rhyme shall change it... one way or the other. There is room for every kind of writing... rhyme, poetry and opera being misunderstood cousins of joy!
- Bill



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