Haiku: Upside-Down, You're Turning Me... (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)

Reviewed on October 12, 2004

Good advise for those who didn't already leave them at home! Glad you had a good time!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 12, 2004

my head is spinning...lol!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 12, 2004

amen!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 12, 2004

I'll take pictures while you ride it :-)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 12, 2004

What mind? Could be messy but I'll try many things once..

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on October 11, 2004

OhhhhhKAY Karla, I feel nauseated already just looking at this truly representative picture here. I now understand why some of us turn gray faster than others. I'll stick to the memories and leave the fun to the kids with stronger tummies!

funhouse of a write Sis,
blessin's,
cynth'ya

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on October 11, 2004

Great Write Karla!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 11, 2004

hahaha Veeeeeery funny!;-) Witty ku karla! So glad you enjoyed the Fair. How about Karen haven't seeh her around. Read all five of her stories. Is she okay?

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on October 11, 2004

Oh kaaaaarla when I grow up i want to write as wellas you. In the meantime I'll avoid those rides. <HUGS> Mikii

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on October 11, 2004

LOL!! loved your second one. :-)

Carmen

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 11, 2004

I always get sick on the those rides when I was a kid. I was such a chicken then...

Good write, Karla!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Letitia Blount (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2004

I pass too. Just the picture got me dizzy. LOL

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on October 11, 2004

Dear Karla,

Great advice in Haiku... though I will admit I would be tempted to go for a ride. LOL

warm hugs your friend from SA
Elga

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on October 11, 2004

You got more guts than I charlie brown...Ed

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 11, 2004

I will pass too Karla...hee hee...
I like to keep my feet on firm ground..snicker..
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on October 11, 2004

I have to agree with Alexanader, i will pass too, I am too chicken LOL.
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 11, 2004

(((Karla)))

Glad I didn't ride it! I have ENOUGH trouble walking withOUT riding these monsters! YIKES! Glad we have better sense than most people....and they call rides like this FUN???? NOT!!! LOL Cute write; glad we got to go! Well done; BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 11, 2004

Leave your stomach at the door! Delightfully good, Karla.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on October 11, 2004

Funny Karla, I would have too!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on October 11, 2004

Looks like fun.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 11, 2004

I am the worlds biggest coward.........
Your haiku could be a refrigerator magnet for me.........
lol.....love it!
anita :)