Haiku: Disappearing Act (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

Great Haiku, Karla! Very creative!

Your Texas friend:Dee

Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

Nice Haiku Karla!

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

Karla,

Insightfully beautiful Haiku, my friend - wonderful!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

My two mutts and I have been digging like mad lately - haven't found that evidence yet; but we will keep you informed!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

I feel the cold chilly weather in this one!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on December 6, 2004

interesting...

Carole

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on December 6, 2004

Where do you come up with these...LOL Ed

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on December 6, 2004

Very funny, Karla. You are great with these clever Kus!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on December 6, 2004

LOL WTG Karla

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on December 6, 2004

I'm not looking forward to scenes like that. lol Well done Karla!

Jack

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on December 6, 2004

This is a great write here
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on December 6, 2004

LOLOL!!! LOved this, and I am a haiku hater- I love unique ones I guess. :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 6, 2004

Karla have you been out of the sound barrier lately;-) your cooking on all six burners and you only have 4;-) Fantastic ku! luv ya Eileen

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on December 6, 2004

Yep but while it is covering up the evidence it sure is nice to look at and then go cozy up to a good fire. Just made myself some hot chocolate.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on December 6, 2004

Ha! Polished up the old noodle, eh? Lemon pledged the cranium and look what pops out! (grin) Clever with a capital "C"... Hilarious, with a HUGE "H"... you dropped me on the spot... In 3 lines, you had me giggling at all that's packed into this. Yes, Clever, indeed! hehe katy xox.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on December 6, 2004

Wild Off Wall Done Good Write Right On Keep Writing It!

TRASK

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on December 6, 2004

(((Karla)))

Ha, ha, ha! This one made me giggle; oh, how I remember those days back in Ohio....I sure miss the snowy and cold days of winter! Fun write about a not so pleasant time of year for most people; still, I do love winter, and I love the snow and cold! Wish we had more of it HERE.....maybe this year we'll get lucky?? (I hope!! We need a good, old fashioned snow storm to kill all these durn bugs!!) Great job; BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D