Headache du Mardi Gras (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Headache du Mardi Gras
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Happy Mardi Gras! :-)

Laissez les bon temps rouler I went to N Awlins to play Mardi Gras was in de air Beads an boobs were EVERwhere Had a drink on Bourbon Street Danced to funky Cajun beats Watched de passin of de Krewes Ate a King Cake (mebbe two) Yelled TH OW ME SUMPIN MIS TER GOT SOME BEADS FO A SIS TER They want me to show my stuff But I wasnt brave enuff That was til those hurricanes What I did next cant explain Those drinks just bout did me in I aint gone did that again I remember I was sick Oh Mon Dieu I sure feel ick Those damn drinks sure kick my ass Next year Im a gonna pass Next year Ill partee at home I dont mind bein alone Perhaps then head will thaw No more headache du Mardi Gras ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (C) Copy written, 8 February, 2005, by Karla Dorman.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on February 9, 2005

Hee Hee, I was seeing triple when I read this fun piece

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

A great write
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

(((Karla)))

Sounds like you have done been IN a Hurricane, with this wild, wacky, whimsical write! A fun read; love the clever way you did the format, and the Cajun accent made this a joy to read! Laissez les bon temps rouler to you too! AAAIIIEEE!! :D Well done; brava!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Karla,

Love the picture - would make a great jig-saw puzzle ... terrific write; very creative work that shines brightly!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Lovely and filled with a nice "Beat" to it!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Karla,

Excellent write. Could feel the celebration in your words.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 8, 2005

Karla, this one brings smiles and oh the memories....a fun write

Hugs, Carole

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

I heard that the hotels and motels were not as booked this year for some reason...I have never been there, maybe some day...wild and weird way to print this one out...LOL! Ed

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Your on a roll. Loved it.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Yep this is a good one.

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

HA HA! Good one Karla! Clever!!!!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Love the way you did the accent.

Well done Karla..

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Fantastic Karla the drama queen!;-) Wonderful visuals,
capture of mood and language etc! Brava!;-)
etw

Reviewed by Lori Moore

This is a wonderful creation.