"Secret Agenda" ~~~~ The cavern of your mind holds marvelous secrets that I have to explore (there's a rumor going around that it is a Cave of Wonders. What I wouldn't give to find out!). To plumb the depths of your genius intimidates me just a little bit, but how can I see just what it is exactly that I'm missing within my own shattered ego & discover what it is that makes you...umm...tick unless I ask questions? I hope you don't mind....Oh! I also wanted to see if I could borrow a cup of sugar & shoot the shit with your Muse. ~~~~ (c) 2005, Karla Dorman.
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Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 7, 2005
HAHA! Just brilliant. Love your diversity. Masterful..
HA! Spot-on, Karla! Don't you just want to worm you way under some other folks' skin and sit inside their brains for a second?! Or a lifetime. Infuriating! Know these feelings sooooo well... hang on a minute: reminds me of a poem I wrote yonks ago... hey, must repost! Thanks for giving me the "cheats" way out (again!!) today! LOL Kate xx PS Never have any sugar, so my fence is no good to you there... but got plenty of that...um... other stuff, though! :))
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on June 7, 2005
Super Great Poem Karla!! Very true! I like that Cave of Wonders. Magnificent!!! Love the pic. perfect.(c :)
Kewl and funny write and I think some times we all have to wonder where and how our muses think and give us the ideas and assignments that they figure we should so easily handle. Easy for them that is.
Great write.
Felix
The Wholly Book of Genesis is a humorous satire on the first book of the Old Testament where the Story of Creation, the building of Noah's Ark, Sodom and Gomorrah and the families of Abraham, Isaac and Jacob are thoroughly spoofed and broadsided.
I LOVE it; very well done!~ BRAVA! Your writings just keep on getting better and better!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Love Tinka
Eileen
Peace and love, Carole
profoundly insightful ... fanastic mind mood poem ...
Good sense...and humor too..lol!
Rich
Great write.
Felix
God Bless
Michelle!
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