snarling attitude rotates on swiveling hips and anvil black hair
(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.
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Reviews of "Haiku (5/7/5): Announcing, The King"
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2005
10 words... that's all it took for you, Karla, to entertain (Ahem) our thoughts and make this compact form do tricks with the imagination... a metaphor-laden dandy of a KU... "King?"... nah... Ku-QUEEN Karla! (grin) katy xox
Very creative Ku, Karla. I suspect you are bracing for Emily and whatever she tosses at you. I am hoping we get some rain from her here in New Mexico.
Take care,
Sherry
Thass whot I'm talkin' about!!!! Bring on da bitch. LOL Gotta love it, Karla, you had your thoughts thinking a little wickedly to come up with this jewel.
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God bless,
Sandie.
Interesting comparison to the King of Rock and Roll to a thunderstorm...unique and clever! Thankyuverymuch!
Keep up the great writing; I applaud your giftedness! BRAVA!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Great Ku Miss Karla!!
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Sherry
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Michelle!