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Deal ... Or No Deal?
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Not about the TV program, but I love that show...LOL!


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The hammock, in a relaxing mood,
requests the pleasure
of my company.
It looks at me longingly; it's been
a while since we met;
too long, truth be told.
I recall the gentle rocking motion
as it whispered sleep ...
sleep ... into my ears:
And so, who am I to disappoint?
I have a day off,
and nothing to do.
My friend asks me, "Deal or no deal?"  I
don't hesitate and
come out a winner.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.

 

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 Reviews of "Deal ... Or No Deal?"
Reviewed by Sherri Smith
Reviewed on April 27, 2006
Great poem and pic to go with. I know exactly what you are feeling here! I love the sun, and napping on the deck. Perfect weather to do that!

Reviewed on April 20, 2006
What a great invitation! The pic is simply adorable!
Love and hugs, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
Love the photo and the write!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
Dear Karla,

I say, accept the invitation from that hammock, whenever it is offered.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
What was the Deal you offered that lovely kitten to get him off that hammock??!!!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
Karla,
I know just how you feel! Sometimes a day of rest is worth much more than any amount of money!
Unfortunately today will not be that day for me, but I hope if it's what you need, then I wish you lots of beautiful dreams!

Lisa

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
Ah hah! A snoozing we shall go. Personally I never liked a hammock, but then, this isn't about me, huh? Cute.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
Interesting write and atypical of your usual work but very good, I really like it and I think it would be better as stand alone without the graphic.

Felix

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
Sweet poem and a soft cuddly moment for me this morning.

Thanks Karla!
Love and peace!
Susan

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
enjoyed the read, like the photo, kitties is good

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 17, 2006
Well done cute pic!!

Love tinka

Reviewed on April 17, 2006
This was way to cute, keep writing and be blessed in doing so
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 17, 2006
Win or lose, no one can beat a nap in a hammock...ed

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2006
Awwww...too cute for words, and yet you captured it purrfectly!

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2006
A Deal that photo is adorable I liked your peom alot Well done.

Reviewed on April 17, 2006
Karla,

If this were money, you are a winner indeed! You've opened the briefcase to a million dollar write, and the picture is absolutely adorable! Awwwwww! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 17, 2006
Now this is REALLY a good deal Karla!;-)lol
Hope you took the cat off firsr...hahaha
Fun write,enjoyed!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2006
Go0d deal, but your always a winner!
Lurves ya!


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