Haiku: Asparagus Spears (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on April 20, 2006

yum

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on April 20, 2006

You are making us HUNGRY!!!
Love, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on April 19, 2006

I love these poems had Asparagus Last night, yummy...
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 19, 2006

No poking either LOL. Great write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 19, 2006

veryyyyyyy funnyyyyy! You have a keen sense of humor Karla! I love asparagus, raw in salads and many other recipes including pasta,but I'd never use a spear on you!;-)
Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on April 19, 2006

haha - I made my son try asparagus at my mom's for Easter. Dawn

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on April 19, 2006

Wow...I love asparagus, and like Jerry below, put some hot butter on them !....Yummmmmmyy
Peter

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on April 19, 2006

I never thought about fighting over asparagus mainly because no one likes them but me and Mariah. You sure have been giving us food for thought lately.
I'm starving now...time for a rich green salad...don't know if I have any asparagus though.

Susan

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on April 19, 2006

Hhhmmm..This is diffrent..Nice haiku..

Love, JoAnne

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 19, 2006

Yukkkkkkkk good write but oh how I hate those little trees. lol

Felix

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 19, 2006

Bring 'em on, drizzle hot butter over 'em, get outta my way. Gotta love it!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 19, 2006

ha ha, cute one Karla, I like aparagus!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 19, 2006

Ksrla~

YUCK! Aparagus. GROSS! I'll leave the green spears for you; I'd much rather eat brussels sprouts! Now THAT is good eatin'! LOL Very well done (not to mention--ah, er, tasty?) write; enjoyed this 'un!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D *grins*

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on April 19, 2006

Karla - Tell Ed to eat his green/yellow/white vegetables, and hush!

I like asparagus, without butter or sauce and add-ons!
I like Ed, but he can't have the sweets alone.

- Bill

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 19, 2006

Since I love blueberries, and absolutely hate asparagus, I'll only fight you for the blueberries - you can have that asparagus!

PS Good Morning to you, too!