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Haiku Chain: Dessert Temptations
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Enjoy the break from healthy food. :)

Keep us in prayer, bad, bad storms on the way from this afternoon through tonight. Thank you!


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dessert temptations
are the dieter's downfall -
too good to resist

iced cakes and cookies
and what about cho co late??
and all that C A N D Y

get thee behind me
thou foul demons of sweet tooth -
and bigger waistlines

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.


 

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 Reviews of "Haiku Chain: Dessert Temptations"
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 21, 2006
Every once in awhile you need to allow for the sweeties. This allowance will allow for the diet time that you need :-) Okay......so it shows I give in recently too :-)

Reviewed on April 21, 2006
Karla!!! How could you! Don't you know you are tempting us to do things we might regrett, but you do it sooo well!
Love and Hugs, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 20, 2006
Screw diets, might as well die one day happy and obese...LOL, Ed

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on April 20, 2006
Yep!! I have some cheesecake in the fridge and I forgot all about it until I read this delicious write.
love and peace.
Susn

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on April 20, 2006
HA, sugar is a Communist plot to sap my will! I do far too many situps every day to indulge, but it looks delicious, Karla! Temptations indeed!

Sage

Reviewed on April 20, 2006
LOL, this is so true
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on April 20, 2006
well done, heh

Reviewed on April 20, 2006
Karla,

I think I gained 20 pounds from readin' this delicious taste treat! LOL Very well penned; love the colored font and the last stanza in particular! Out, Satan, out!! LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D YUMMO! :P

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 20, 2006
Great write Karla but you sure no how to tempt a diabetic into sinning.

Felix

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 20, 2006
A Temptation hard to resist...gimme my rusk...let me chew that NOW!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by B Thomas Daniels (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2006
your haiku is making me hungry

;)

I love the third one here, Get thee behind me lol Great

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on April 20, 2006
Lols at Jerry below
I am in total concordance with him !
Peter

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2006
Pssst! Pas some of dat stuff over heah, hon?


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