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It Should Have Been Me
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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The Real Reason for the Season: His death and resurrection. He's alive!

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... What was good about it?  They
beat my Lord, they beat Him to a
bloody pulp.  His shoulders bore
the stripes of my chastisement; His
features, nearly erased under thorns
pouring blood into His eyes.  That
should have been me.

And then they took Him and laid
Him on a cross, scraping more skin
off of His back; skin He couldn't
afford to lose.  They nailed His
wrists and feet to the tree!!  Pinned
in place; He couldn't escape.  That
should have been me.

And then they took Him down, and
laid Him in the grave; the Light
went out of my world; it's dark; it's
dark; the ground shook; I'm afraid --

Who is this before me, with face
like lightning?  Who is this telling
me, 'Fear not, ye, for I know ye seek
Jesus,which was crucified.  He is
not here, for He is risen, as He
said.  Come, see the place
where the Lord lay,

And go quickly and tell His
disciples that He is risen from
the dead, and behold!  He
goeth before you into Galilee,
there ye shall see Him.  Lo,
I have told you.' * I ran, I ran ...
fear and joy in my heart.

And as I went to tell them,
Jesus met me.  I fell at His
feet, crying, 'All hail' and
worshipped Him ... and He
said, 'Be not afraid.'  He
did it for me, He did it for
me, so it wouldn't be me.

That's love.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman.  (4/6)

Scripture taken from Matthew 28: 5-7

 
 


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 Reviews of "It Should Have Been Me"
Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on April 8, 2007
Very moving. I especially like the last line. R

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
Great reminder poem Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
There is no Love that is deeper nor stronger and yet softer than the one which placed a life so another could live....Eternally....your work on this poetic expression is written with much Love....


A very nice work for the celebration of.....Jesus....


nice.....Art Sun...

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
Oh Karla, what a reminder. I'll tell ya ... I will certainly focus on Him, and the work He did for me, and the rest of humanity, instead of bunnies and eggs. Go figure! Blessings to you eternal sister!

Light and Wisdom ...

Reviewed on April 6, 2007
Halleujiah, the Lord lives on, and we are blessed for that crimson blood he shed for us on Calvary, the message I've been sharing with the kids at church, Easter is not about goodies, and chocolate treats, it's about the son of man who died for us on Calvary
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
Perfect love, He had to die as a mortal, to triumph for mankind, to demolish the devils foundations for always, and bring us back to God... Great write Spec K

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
Dear Karla,

This is a nice poem for Easter as it carries the wise message that none of us are perfect. "For all have sinned and fall short of the glory." Blessings to you and Karen on this holiday weekend.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Sharon Lawson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
Beautiful, even humbling words that remind us what Jesus suffered to save our wretched souls. It reminded me of when I watch the film 'The Passion'. Watching a very accurate portrayal of what Jesus suffered for us made me think about myself as a person. At least he is in a better place now while still able to reach out to us!
Happy Easter :o)
Shaz X

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
karla this one touched me so deeply this morning reading the beauty, sacrifice, the sadness of the Cross he bore. But the Joy he held within putting the Devil and death under his foot.
"Who is this before me, with face
like lightning? Who is this telling
me, 'Fear not, ye, for I know ye seek
Jesus,which was crucified. He is
not here, for He is risen, as He
said. Come, see the place
where the Lord lay,"

Glory to The Risen Lord.

Blessings & Love & Peace,
Josie

Reviewed on April 6, 2007
No doubt that Jesus is alive and well in the heaven of the Lord. Your brother and friend in Africa.
Abdi-noor

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
And no greater love has there ever been.

Reviewed on April 6, 2007
Karla~

One word: WOW!! It is as though you were right there, witnessing the Crucifiction, His Death, and finally His Resurrection. Reminds me of the song "The Third Man" by Loretta Lynn, when she dreamed about it and was recounting what she saw. Vivid imagery, powerful lines, inspiring verse! BRAVA, one of your *BEST*!!

Don't tell me this wasn't inspired by God! WOW!!!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Happy Easter, and thank you for remembering the REAL Reason why we celebrate it! :D *applause*

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
HALLELUJAH TO OUR LAMB OF GOD!!!

Karla, this is so piercing and true, it has caused me to weep yet again, on this Holiest Day of Observance. I will keep this beauty...for it should have been me, too........

I love you dearly, Sister.
I pray you A Blessed Ressurection Celebration.
Love&Hugs always, Rhonda


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