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Cinquain: Caught in the Act
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hee hee :)

Image (c) 2007, Karla Dorman

(Sorry so shaky: wasn't expecting it.)


Poem Artwork


Thunder
is the dropping
of evidence after
being caught by photographer's
bright flash 

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (9/26)

 

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 Reviews of "Cinquain: Caught in the Act"
Reviewed on September 28, 2007
You sure got that RIGHT Karla!
Love the thunderous effect of wording and pict. taking!
Warmly, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox

STay Positive! Happy and STrong!

Reviewed by Jean Sharp-Latham
Reviewed on September 27, 2007
Twice as beautiful! Jean

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 26, 2007
wow--really cool!!

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on September 26, 2007
Your movement only gives us two of those beautiful flashes.
Good job with some Special effects, albiet unintended.

Walt

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 26, 2007
Well done and well captured in picture and in word...

Fee

Reviewed on September 26, 2007
Its a great write, and it looks natural to me, I love the way you captured the beauty...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 26, 2007
The pink brilliance of your lightening is something we don't see here in Tampa.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on September 26, 2007
...a striking thought...caught in flash...
John

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 26, 2007
Somebody need to change the bulb of that flashing ligth up there.
Georg

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on September 26, 2007
Karla, this is a beautiful capture of the raging lighting lashing out at the sky...loved it!

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on September 26, 2007
I have to agree with Kathy on this one Karla! No wonder they want you on TV. Be careful out there and stay safe!!
Love and hugs,
Ann

Reviewed by J AG
Reviewed on September 26, 2007
so much complex beauty and power can be captured in the seeming simplicity of a frame, a frozen moment in time just as impressive as the seemingly simple 5 lined poem... the illusion has been broken. great visual and poetic artistry.

much peach, jackie

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on September 26, 2007
Your cinquain makes me think of God as the photographer. Enchanting!

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2007
Amazing photo Karla, stay safe, blessings, Holly

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on September 26, 2007
Amazing photo and poem!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on September 26, 2007
Now, this poem is funny. Most illuminating [followed by thunderous applause]

Enjoyed.
Kathy

Reviewed on September 26, 2007
Karla, are you nuckin' FUTZ?? LOL at Labelle's and Mr. Ed's reviews...think they got it right! And YOU got it right with this cinquain! Very well done, very clever! BRAVA, Stormspinner! Just stay safe...

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn the Texas Tornado. :D

Reviewed on September 26, 2007
Stay inside!!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 26, 2007
Just don't get Zapped!


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