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Early Riser
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Yawn...huh? What?? LOL


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Three thirty in the morning,
not a soul in sight - wait.  Too
early for Garth and thunder,
rolling.  Shhhh.  S i l e n c e - except
for the Muse who has wakened
with words running around in
the brain and a nose stuffed with
cold.  *sigh*  Wouldn't be so bad
if the words running made sense,
would come together and make
beautiful music with the
tune stuck in head - no such luck.
Thank God not a singer - you've
heard of making a joyful
noise?  My voice just that:  noise.  Hard
enough being a writer
without adding some vocals -
that's a sound no one should hear,
'specially in the morning.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (12/27)
 

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 Reviews of "Early Riser"
Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on December 29, 2007
Garth? Brookes? Is that es or just s? Funny one.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on December 28, 2007
Your muse has a cold?
At least the noise is joyful.
Cute one Karla.

Walt

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on December 28, 2007
Sounds like a good morning to stick close to bed! Take Care of You! Sheila:)

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on December 27, 2007
Sometimes we waken before our Muse and when she wants to nod for another few minutes we should let her. She can always get us back...and she does.

Love,

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on December 27, 2007
I'm with you Karla, this being awake early has a way of catching up to us. Hope you're feeling better.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed on December 27, 2007
LOL, I've been HERE lately Sweetie, getting up to suck on honey cough drops! for my sore throat, tempor. help!
writing, nahhh, not feeling like it at the moment!
Great poem and thoughts! Early morning rising is the BEST for me too, a quiet home and restless soul, Smiling!
STay STrong!
STay Positive!
Warm hugs, LOVE, and Blessings, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
Write On!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 27, 2007
Just smiling!!

Thanks for sharing!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on December 27, 2007
I have to smile at this one...I too, am one of the ones up in the middle of the night unable to breath well...drat this head cold
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on December 27, 2007
...most times...late becomes early...my thoughts come...at undiscovered times. Not so bad...but a nose stuffed is.
your thoughts in tune...
John

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on December 27, 2007
lol,,,,, cute write,,,

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on December 27, 2007
cute write-you and Rose seem to be in the same boat!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 27, 2007
That darned old Muse can truly rouse us at some very un-godly hours.

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on December 27, 2007
I know EXACTLY what you mean, Karla.....
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 27, 2007
You said it, a poets lot is a complicated one at times and our minds work in different ways than non writers.

Fee

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on December 27, 2007
Good morning my friend, I too awoke with words jumbled in my head...I'm working on a poem, hope to post it later. Enjoyed this much, that early morning muse is surely alive and well!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 27, 2007
LOL! What a hoot. Lovely flow and energy in this piece. Visually clear and imposing. I can see everything in your words.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 27, 2007
Good Morning to you, Karla, I, too, have been up since that ungodly hour you mentioned . . . Drat . . . Sing on . . . Sing on . . .

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on December 27, 2007
Karla,

Perhaps the mod will change once you hit the shower.(lol) I know it does wonders for my voice. Sort of deadens the accoustics. (lol) Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed on December 27, 2007
Karla~

You can sing to me anytime you want! LOL Loved the lines you used here: "too early for Garth and thunder rolling" and "nose stuffed with cold". LOL Too cute, but spot on brilliant! BRAVA; very well penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D (And NOT Loretta Lynn...LOL Especially at 3:00 in the morning!~)


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