Tanka 3: Unwilling Participant (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 20, 2008

Does the rope win? :)

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

Interesting Karla. Even being the rope is something we should not take for granted, meaning that even being the rope is a gift some will never get.
Stay well, *Glen*

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

This is quite a piece! Has me laughing and remembering times when I wore a shirt, and the wind whipped it this way and that, while trying to present a picture of sedateness [me that is].

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

Hwy...was right there today. I looked toward the Tampa skyline and there were teo huge thunderheads growing like a cyclops. Then I looked towards Plant City and it was sky blue with nary a cloud. I think Mother Nature has multiple personalities at times.
Love and blessings,
Susan

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

"To be...or not to be?"...heading in which bound direction.
well done Karla...
John

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

Excellent write, thank yoy for sharing. Love the picture that you enclosed with it...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

cold and blustery here too...
-24 with wind chill!
BRRRR....
I love the description of the wind in this poem. :~)
Cryssa

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

I concur with Karen... --Charlie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

And what a strong rope you are!!!
Georg

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

lol,,, I can see you like a shuffle board in the wind,,,, awesome write!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

Often know that feeling Karla, beautifully penned and the pic seranades your words. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are on the way,Rose

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

Wonderful pen,enjoyed..take care sweet lady...HUgs

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

Very good, love this one and know that feeling too.

Fee

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

Great job, well penned. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

Windy here yesterday..but all calm today with lots of sun! Good write, Karla.....you expressed it well!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

Karla you really brought the force of the wind to life in your poem. Great work.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

It's a twister, it's a twister!....LOL

Sounds like it from the breeziness of these words. You are getting so good at tankas! This format was MADE for you! BRAVA, extremely well penned and illustrated!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D *clapping*

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

It is that time of the year, Mother Nature is throwing a conniption fit . . . I wasn't picking on you with my poem, Karla . . . LOL