Tanka No. 4: Voyeuristic (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

fun write--glad you are warming up!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

Yes! I'd say it's time to pull the drapes as the heat goes up. You're a fynny girl!
Love and blessings!
Susan

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

lol. Liz

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

I have forgotten what the sunshine looks like, rain all this last week and supposed to be all of next week as well, intersting weather for Cali...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

nooooooooooo, keep them open, i love soccer too.....
and a shag at half time, kewl...

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

Hee-hee excellent!

Reviewed by Joyce Devenish

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

Excellent Karla. You are so right...Luv...Joyce

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

You got it!
Becca~

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

very nicely done..love the image as well...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

...sheer pleasure...removed of windows...become laced thoughts.
good one Karla....
John

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

Fire works. Doesn't it? --Charlie

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

ahhh how sweet it is!;-) Nice change of pace, Karla!

ciao
et

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

tsk, tsk, tsk... I think you rated that one wrong...
(But it gave me quite a chuckle.)
Cryssa :~)

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

Smiling here, Karla! Hot write! Enjoyed it!

Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

Hi Karla--Karen mentioned this tanka. I like the misdirection and then the laugh at the end. :)

Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

Cute Karla :)

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

You are amazing. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

WOW!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

Warm thoughts, you say? How about sizzling?

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

Karla~

You have a deadly streak of humor there, buddy boy! LOL This is too funny; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twinkles, Karen Lynn. :D LOL

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

peeping-tom...peeping-tom...peeping-tom where are you?
we just closed our curtains to block the freeking view!

Georg