Closed For Repairs (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 9, 2008

Karla,
Wonderfully imaginative! Love this one! Way to showcase that sense of humor:) Hugs~
Sheila

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

Keep these "popped-in-my head" poems coming, Karla. I LOVE it...very cleverly done, girl. And it brought chuckles to me :o)

Micke

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

Karla,

Perhaps your mechanic went on vacation with mine.(lol) Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

Broken heart so many times and no "closed for repairs" sign.
Shake a leg and be done with it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

Ah! I've had some of those days!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on February 7, 2008

Actually I believe this to be absolutely brilliant....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 7, 2008

cute!

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on February 7, 2008

Well, it happens sometimes, so why not write a poem on the poem one cannot write? How postmodern!

On a different note, you could be interested in my poem "dysfonctional poetry"...

I like how you ended this with the word "thing" in the corner.

Axilea

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon

Reviewed on February 7, 2008

LOL! Thanks for being so down to earth. :)

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 7, 2008

LOL! That's great, Karla. Hilarious. Well, at least your sense of humor is well in tact.

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on February 7, 2008

Sounds like my "Englyn" poems... hee, hee, hee..
(Hugs)
Cryssa

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan

Reviewed on February 7, 2008

Oh, can I ever relate! An excellent write! Rebecca

Reviewed by Joyce Devenish

Reviewed on February 7, 2008

Ha ha. My failures get posted anyway. This is not one of yours....Joyce

Reviewed by Sandi Schraut

Reviewed on February 7, 2008

Oh sweetie is my favorite kind of poem, one that comes from the real world, which often is out of rhyme, out of step, has no meter and alliteration and assonance are purely accidental..........Sandi

Reviewed by Ace Antonio Hall

Reviewed on February 7, 2008

LOL

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on February 7, 2008

LOL, looks like your muse needs her tires rotated...or maybe a teeth cleaning?
I don't know how you come up with this stuff, but it's sure good!
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Beryl McMullen

Reviewed on February 7, 2008

Very clever Karla just love it

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 7, 2008

Seems okay to me. lol

Fee

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on February 7, 2008

...like the mechanics of this one Karla...
good job...
John

Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams

Reviewed on February 7, 2008

even in your futile attempts you are brilliant LOL

be well and happy,
kathy

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 7, 2008

I see nothing wrong with your writing or your poetry, StormSpinner. You write as they come to you, and never mind what others may think. I happen to love how you write, and so do many other people! So pick that pen up, get that muse a flowin', and WRITE, WRITE, WRITE!!

Very well penned frustration with a humorous slant; gotta' love it! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twinkles, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on February 7, 2008

Karla you are a stitch,,,Open those doors ASAP :)

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on February 7, 2008

Great write, thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~