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Hometown Parade
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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May you all have a wonderful, safe Fourth of July.

Image (c) 2007, Karla Dorman


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... the sun sizzles in the sky above,
adding more red to the white and blue
of patriotism.  The barest
hint of a breeze lifts the colors high;
the honor guard holding them will not
let them fall.  Children and their parents
hello their neighbors across the way.
Four military jets from the base
north of here shake the ground with thunder's
roar; sirens cut through it, announcing
the start of the parade.  The bands and
floats begin their march down Johnson Street:
this, how we start the Fourth of July
where I live, in Burleson, Texas.
Won't be until later on in the
evening when we'll end things with a bang.  :)

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (7/2)

 

 


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 Reviews of "Hometown Parade"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on July 7, 2008
My hubby and I had errands to run on the 4th...I was a little surprised and quite pleased when we found 90% of the businesses we needed to go to, closed...for the 4th... It helped me remember just why we celebrate this day.
Cryssa

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on July 6, 2008
...sounds like a celebration to me Karla...in this well done patiotic write.

John

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on July 4, 2008
A dramatic start to the celebration. Towns close to me tend to do the fireworks on the 3rd. I don't get it. I think they're missing the point. Great poem.
Sheila

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 4, 2008
Three cheers for Burleson, TX! This sounds like my kind of July Fourth parade. Peace be with you. JMW

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on July 4, 2008
Wonderful images created in this patriotic poem.........M HAPPY 4TH

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on July 3, 2008
I feel the excitement and patriotism behind the lines. --Charlie

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 3, 2008
Wonderfully expressed of a day worth celebrating with family and friends, enjoy and always remember how it all began and why.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 3, 2008
Lovely write and almost play by play bring this Canuck into the spirit and fevor that you Yanks celebrate with...Happy Fourth to all.

Fee

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on July 3, 2008
I'd love to be part of this great parade, can I?

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 3, 2008
So few towns have parades anymore but I remember them in Sea Isle when I was so much younger...nice one, Karla...e

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2008
Happy 4th to you Karla, and as well thank you for being you! Love Holly

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on July 3, 2008
Happy 4th of July to you. I know my hubby Tom always went to his hometown parade and I expressed it in word in my Patriotic poem to Tom on my den. He loved the fire engines, the bands, the music, and atmosphere of the red white and blue. Thanks for posting this patriotic poem. Really good and suits the day.***********

Reviewed on July 3, 2008
thanks Storm spinner there is nothing like a hometown parade and thank you for your message. You enjoy the 4th
all the best
Tuchy

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 3, 2008
Happy July 4th. Sounds like a lot of fun also sounds like our Canada day. Thank you for sharing the excitement.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed on July 3, 2008
Karla~

Wow, what imagery!! I could see and hear the parade coming down Johnson Street!! EXCELLENT poem that truly evokes excitement as the parade gets ready to commence! Ain't nothin' like a good ol' fashioned parade to get the juices pumpin'; the juices only get primed for the big fireworks show later in the evening, coupled with some great music!! Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Love the pic!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 3, 2008
May you have a wonderful, safe, Fourth of July, too.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on July 3, 2008
Happy 4th of July to you too with a great poem that sparks fireworks inside the reader's eyes :-)

Edwin

Reviewed on July 3, 2008
Enjoy the celebration Karla, great poem.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on July 3, 2008
Happy Fourth to you and sis.
May your path always take you toward the light.

Walt

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2008
May your fourth be eventful . . .

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 3, 2008
Karla,

Happy 4th of July My Friend. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on July 3, 2008
One holiday I truly miss. Well written description, Karla! Makes me wish I was there!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 2, 2008
Thanks for sharing Karla, I could see the parade! Happy 4th to you and Karen!Enjoy the bangs;-)...ET

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on July 2, 2008
Happy fourth, Karla! I'm celebrating in Arizona and those people here know all about the big bang!
Thanks to all service men and women, without you, this wouldn't be happening!
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on July 2, 2008
Thank you, Happy fourth of July Karla, and love this picture,
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"


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