Tattletale! (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on January 2, 2009

Karla,
You see the world--sun and storms-with a vision quite different than anyone else!
Great poem!

Reviewed on July 17, 2008

she is a formidable lady, is she not? -- I'll have a sugar cone with double dips of pistachio metaphors -- my pace be with you always JMW

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on July 16, 2008

Karla,
Cute poem, and I enjoyed the videos. Great work!
Sheila

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on July 16, 2008

I truly adore your imagination and these great metaphors you come up with

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 16, 2008

Your pics are fascinating karla,and I love this poem with it! Now off to see the you tube!YOu are somethin else lately;-)!!! Kudo's!...ET

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 16, 2008

Love it Karla, can almost picture a little girl on her back looking up at the sky on a summer day.

Fee

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

Now that is a great shot! Cute, fun loving and very imaginative....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

You interpret the sky
here on earth...

Axilea

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

This is great Karla and I really enjoyed your youtube vidio. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

Cute one Karla.

Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader)

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

loved the imagery, great piece

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

I love the imagery in this-- implied, not over-stated. And it allows my mind to go wild-- a regular carnival of a feast I had, chewing on your sky-candy. --Charlie

BTW:(amend "see" to "she")... awesome poem! I've missed reading you. There are simply too many poems for me to catch up... so if there's one or two in particular you'd like me to see, message me. :) (I'm done with my little project!!) (oooo, I'm SO done with it)

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

An interesting analogy. I like that cotton candy in the sky, too.

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

hee, hee, hee....
Your sense of humor kills me!
Cryssa :~)

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

Thanks for the smile loved this one
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

enjoyable read!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

Love your wit, Karla ~ perfect summertime poem.

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

...wonderful and enjoyable write Karla...
and along with others thoughts...this is clever.
John

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

ditto karen, cute as - cheeky sunshine *pfs*

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

cute and very clever!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

Be happy it ain't Rufuz licking at your cone, because with that tongue it would only take one lick and away would go your cone...Ed

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

It wasn't me, so don't even START thinking that! LOL Delightful write; brava, Karla!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

Not to worry, you will laugh yourself silly coming November's 100% cloudly skies...because you are dreaming of them, don't you?

Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

Shame on Her! And tonight, tell the man in the moon what she did - he'll talk to her for you, and straighten everything out. And in this heat, I only eat my ice cream cones in the moonlight!

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

Do I hear a little angst in your tone here, young lady? Nice write.

Cheers,
Dan