Winter's Mouth (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on December 28, 2008

I love your metaphors "chilly mouth" "bitter teeth". You put a smile on my face.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on December 23, 2008

Great one! That last line takes the cake. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on December 23, 2008

right? this is beautiful

Reviewed by Juliet Waldron

Reviewed on December 22, 2008

Yep, Karla, your "blue norther" is biting us too. Merry Christmas, Stormy Poetess!

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on December 22, 2008

lol yes the winter does have bitter teeth
love it Karla, Merry Christmas!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 22, 2008

Most apt and timely, Karla. It's cold here as well. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on December 22, 2008

Great title and wonderful wit!

Aberjhani

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on December 21, 2008

Love it, Karla. Hope you have enough novacaine on hand. -gene.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on December 21, 2008

lol,,, this is great Karla :)

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on December 21, 2008

Love the humorus twist on this poem, Karla...
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on December 21, 2008

what a delightfully humorous poem -- Karla,you have created another gem-- peace and love to you my dear friend -- JMW

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on December 21, 2008

Cute... and a hook I wasn't expecting... lindalaw

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on December 21, 2008

hahahahhahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. Didn't see that coming!
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on December 21, 2008

Don't let him in Karla, he really does bite...so cute and funny. Love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 21, 2008

He's banging on my door right now, and howling, and man, he does have mighty big teeth!

Reviewed by Miller Caldwell

Reviewed on December 21, 2008

Loved the thought behind this.
My beautiful young neighbour brought us round a piece of her first time made Christmas cake. She apologised that the icing had not set. I told her that meant she must love me. 'Cos if it had been hard and brittle icing, I would have beaten your moggy to the dentist!
Miller

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on December 21, 2008

An enjoyable poem to read,I love it,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 21, 2008

Good one, love the comparison for that is all too often how the nip of a cold Norther feels.

fee

Reviewed by Steve Joos

Reviewed on December 20, 2008

You've described old man winter well. He's really biting hard tonight in Indiana (it's supposed to be seven above by morning). Ste warm.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 20, 2008

probably hoping for a silver lining ;)

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on December 20, 2008

interesting--we are in full fledged winter here!

Reviewed by Jayne Waggoner (Reader)

Reviewed on December 20, 2008

enjoyable. I loved every words.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 20, 2008

brilliant and delightful!;-)

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on December 20, 2008

Let him bite you
He won't bite hard.....lol
Excellent write Karla
most enjoyable
Cute cat, had one just like him
Her name was "CLEO"
Love & Peace be with you
MERRY CHRISTMAS

William

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on December 20, 2008

Karla~

I didn't know that Winter came in on Girlie paws! LOL Clever metaphoric write, and the piccy is just too cute! AWWW! Very well penned/illustrated; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D X0X0XOX0 *purring*

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on December 20, 2008

I love this and that Kitten is just to adorable thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on December 20, 2008

Karla~!

This is one solid poem . . . OUTSTANDING dear friend!!!

LOve & Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on December 20, 2008

Very clever Karla.