... the dress, so transparent,
you can see the skin, under:
diaphanous clouds slip off
of the blue shoulders of sky.
The nipple of sun peeks out
for just a brief moment: it is
enough to ensure your night
will be filled with that vision. =]
Once more you give us a fresh and exciting perspective of Nature's gifts. This is a more sensual approach. Done beautifully. It makes me think of a shy virgin, slipping her nighty off her shoulder. Love and Hugs,
Sheila
"Diaphanous" is a wonderful word for that picture, and your poem describes it beautifully. Your writings are great, Karla, but I must say you are additionaly talented in photography. Some of the pictures you take are absolutely breath-taking.
I wish you wouldn't use big words like this on me. I have enough trouble with the simple ones. ;-) Well done my friend. I like this very much Karla. Cute write. God bless.
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You sensuously described nature well
Loved it
Peace & love be with you
William
Sheila
Be always safe,
Karen
Edwin
This is a visual poem, very effective.
Axilea
So well realised and delivered, as Gene says one of your best and I, too, love it.
John
In Christs Love
Michelle~
One of your best. -gene.
Wiht Love,
Cindy
Georg
So much said in this short poem, yet it empowers the reader to delve into the world of the poet's mind - breathtaking!!
Hugs,
Lance
hugs
Fee
"The nipple of sun peeks out
for just a brief moment: it is
enough to ensure your night
will be filled with that vision".
Fantastic!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Is it not Human Nature to both Commune with Nature, and to be Naturally HORNY?
:) :) :) TomKat.
In Spirit,
Bear