See You Next Fall (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2009

OOPS! I think FALL...is not your favorite season. Walk easy dear Karla
Your little poem is cute!

Reviewed on March 31, 2009

Karla, not again! -- but your metaphor is tremendously creative -- and the photograph, the work of a seasoned veteran -- keep the faith my dear friend -- peace and love -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo

Reviewed on March 31, 2009

I'm so sorry, Karla. Sometimes it seems we have all we can handle and then something else comes along to prove us wrong and that is where our strength and faith come into play. I hope it is better for you today and every day. Many hugs, Elizabeth

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on March 30, 2009

. . . bullet hole metaphor here - you are so good!

Lance

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2009

Oh my, I certainly hope you feel better real soon sweet lady.....becareful OK...Hugsssss

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 30, 2009

so sorry, Karla. I commiserate, being very tentative about slipping and falling for similar reasons, though mine are not acute like your fibromyalgia. Mind you, if it's a chance to rest up with such a BEAUTIFUL lap-warmer purring you back to health and contentment, then guess that is some kinda recompense! xx

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on March 30, 2009

Ouch Karla, I hope you get feeling better, gentle hugs and prayers sent your way
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on March 30, 2009

OUCH! Karla... Your legs keep "Spring"ing out from under you to hasten you to "Fall." Maybe it is time for summer? hee, hee...
Sure hope you heal quickly!
Love and hugs,
Cryssa

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on March 30, 2009

In the spirit of this sad but amusing poem, Did you have a nice trip?I hope that didn't hurt your feelings. and wow! what a cute picture. I do hope you recover quickly. Hugs and love, J'nia

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on March 30, 2009

I too, hope you feel better soon so that you will be able to enjoy the spring weather and get some more great cloud shots...be careful
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on March 30, 2009

I hope you Spring back soon Karla,,,,oooooouch!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 30, 2009

I hope your seasonal collection doesn't get any bigger - be careful out there.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on March 30, 2009

I am here with lil'brother, if you jump down from a chair but don't fall...you certainly are allergic to gravity!

Georg

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on March 30, 2009

Very nicely written, I sometimes feel that the seasons are really messed up. Please take care of yourself.
No more falling down!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on March 29, 2009

Clever and humorous....but, be careful Karla! You're in my prayers.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on March 29, 2009

Karla, please take a year off from hurting yourself. This, from
a guy who hasn't a wrist to standon. I love kitty cats. -gene.

Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Reviewed on March 29, 2009

Crafty and really funny! But I ache for you ...this poem is shows it's good to laugh at one's self, eases the pain. Great write and photo!

Cynthia

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on March 29, 2009

Oh Karla, not again! Another boo-boo is not what you need. I think it takes a great poet to be physically hurt and write an entertaining verse about it. And that picture - I want that cat! It's so beautiful.
Hugs from California,
Marcia

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 29, 2009

Karla~

I will have to pray to God to give you new feet...or a better sense of balance! LOL Sorry for your aches and pains (not to mention, bruised knees); I pray and hope you feel better soon~ You are ever in my prayers! Delightful write and piccy; good to know that you can laugh at your own mishaps! It shows how strong of a person you really are! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D X0X0X0X0X0

Adorable kittycat! *purring*

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on March 29, 2009

Take care, Sweet Karla,
but while a fall is serious I have to smile at the gloss you put on it and your ability to shrug it off, so admirable and strong in spirit.
John

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on March 29, 2009

I loved this Karla, and the cat made me laugh.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on March 29, 2009

I'm afraid...you must float or sway above the ground...because when you do hit the ground, it's usually with a T H U D! OUCH!!!! Sorry, and hope you get thru this one without so much pain & misery... hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 29, 2009

You are, just as I've said before, allergic to gravity...ed

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on March 29, 2009

I can definitely relate to this my friend. Been there and done that. Be more careful there Karla. God bless.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on March 29, 2009

oh, so sorry--be careful, my friend--i love the photo!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 29, 2009

Great write and love the kiddie...

hugs
Yea Jimmy takes Martinsville...