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Acrostic: Conviviality (For Cryssa C's Challenge)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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You know the saying, Men are from Mars, women are from Venus ... LOL!

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Conviviality, adj [LL convivialis, from the Latin convivium banquet and fr com- together + vivere to live]:  enjoying companionship and the pleasures of feasting and drinking; jovial; festive.  (New Merriam-Webster Dictionary)


"Conviviality" (For Cryssa's Challenge)

C ome, you said, when you saw me wiping my fourteen eyes
O nce more, What makes you so sad?  No bother, really, it's
N othing at all, I said, It's just whenever I hear this piece by
V ivaldi, 'The Four Seasons,' I get a bit nostalgic.  You see,
I 'm here on holiday.  Where are you from?, to which I replied,
V enus.  Oh!, you clapped, I love Venice!  I went there last year.
I t was wonderful:  saw the canals, rode the gondolas and all.  
A hhh ... VENUS, I said, you know, second rock from the sun?
L et me out of here!, you screamed and ran out the door.  And
I was having so much fun.  Eating the last of my dessert, I
T hought to myself, are all men like this?  Know they are on Mars.
Y ou know, whoever said Earth was a happening place, L I E D.

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (10/7)

 


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 Reviews of "Acrostic: Conviviality (For Cryssa C's Challenge)"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 9, 2009
enjoyed your humor and cleverness ...

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 9, 2009
Oh boy, glad I had a chance to read this one, fantastic piece of work, full of descriptive images...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on October 9, 2009
Very good. Superb in fact. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 8, 2009
Your last line - is out of this world! And fourteen eyes - Wow!

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on October 8, 2009
I loved your creativity with this one Karla!Nice job.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 8, 2009
The only "Four Seasons" that can tempted me is that hotel in Honolulu!

Georg


Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
Karla, you are a very creative lady!

Reviewed on October 7, 2009
This is great Karla, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Elizabeth Hobbs (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
I'm still smiling as I write this. Very beautifully done. Cheers, Liz

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
Oh Karla,,you put a smile on my face..creative indeed! :)

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
As a resident of Vemarsus I can assure you that your observations, though not incorrect, may be exaggerated. Except I'm not a fan of dessert. Patrick

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
Karla you outdid yourself! Great sense of humor...You really do challenges well! Brava!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
lol. Love it Karla, simply love it. Liz

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
Good reply and a charming story in itself...we men folk get spooked easily. lol
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
Nice one Karla. Very clever and entertaining indeed.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
Gotta love it / Even if I didn't "gotta" love it / I did / Funny . . .

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
Nice rise to the challenge, Karla. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
Karla you made me laugh out loud today!
I needed that, really enjoyed reading it!
Thank you Karla for sharing your wonderful
gift, I need to stop by more often!!!!

Love And Prayers
Always!!
Inspire

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
Karla,
This poem is playful and creative. Had fun reading it:)
Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
A good one Karla.
You are certainly growing
in your skills. Enjoyed.
Blessings ...

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
Ah! Your definition differs from mine... My dictionary just said pleasant; enjoyable because of its friendliness or sociable; fond of the company of others
Your poems continue to make me smile and laugh though!
And... I love the picture you paired with this out of this world poem.
Waiting for my next word... with baited? breath... or maybe just shaking in my boots after that last word of xanthippe!
hee, hee...
Cryssa

Reviewed on October 7, 2009
This is absolutely adoRAble; what an imagination you have! EXCELLENT response to Cryssa's challenge; you met and exceeded it, bar none! Very well penned/illustrated; brava, Karla!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
I loved your acrostic. When I look at the picture of the sky, I think of the millions of tales that probably already have originated and are still to come from out of those dark heavens. I enjoyed your tale.


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