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Sharing
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... We share everything, her and I. ....


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I love my sister.  I do.  Really.  We
share everything, her and I.  Even a
cold:  think I've caught the same bug
she had.  She's feeling a bit better ---
should be.  I feel like --- been making

sure she has been stocked up with
Kleenex and keeping warm, forcing
fluids.  And in return, she gave it to
me, this present I didn't want or need.
Isn't she sweet?  What sisters are for.

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (11/28)

 


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 Reviews of "Sharing"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on December 16, 2009
however, for the greater gift of her love, what's a little cold between sisters? -- kill the bug so that the two of you may once again rock and roll -- peace and love to you Karla, my dear friend --Jon Michael

Reviewed on December 3, 2009
Too funny, Karla. And too funny -- if not so funny. And like Peter, I tried to kill the bug. There haven't been flies in my house for months, so that's just crazy. As you know, P and I are nuts anyway. Hey, I like this. I have a sister too, but she's 1500 miles away. Not a threat. But I do miss her. I wish I could catch her cold! (if it's mild, that is).

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on December 1, 2009
You don't always get what you want......but if you try sometimes you just might get what you don't want. Bummer. Patrick

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on December 1, 2009
Not just sisters can relate to this. I live with my father and he and I dare one another to bring any ailment home to the other. So far this season we haven't, but how long will it last??? Rebecca

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 30, 2009
You got me, Karla. I tried to wipe at the bug on my screen. lol. Love the sense of loyalty in this poem. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 29, 2009
Sort of like being married...lol
fee

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 29, 2009
Isn't she sweet? What sisters are for!!

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on November 29, 2009
awwww...love it...just so beautiful...and this is of course love...tee hee hee hee ....eeeeks but am getting scared of this moving bug....hope it doesn't wrriggles outta my lappy.......best wishes Karla....neerja

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on November 29, 2009
Nothing like a sister, is there? Thanks for the smile, Karla!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 29, 2009
As they said, from your own you will get it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(LOL)

Georg


Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on November 29, 2009
This is nice,take care

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on November 28, 2009
..all in the family :) why not lol,,, now share a pot of hot tea with honey !!!!!

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on November 28, 2009
Yes, I agree with Michelle. That is something you wouls NOT want to share.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed on November 28, 2009
One thing I wouldnt want to share, Jen, Fran and I spent a few weeks of playing share the cold not fun!!
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 28, 2009
Gotta love those sisters!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 28, 2009
Aawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Nice Karla. lol Sorry, my friend.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on November 28, 2009
I keep trying to kill the cartoon bug on my screen. Damn! Well, what's a sister (or brother) in my case to do? Well done. You're lucky to have eachother.

Reviewed on November 28, 2009
Sorry 'bout that! I really and truly am!! Hope you feel better soon; I'll say a prayer for healing for you! Cute write, and adorable bug! Well done, Karla! *KISSIES*

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Now we don't have to worry about runnin' out of Kleenex! LOL

Reviewed by Darryn Murphy
Reviewed on November 28, 2009
nice, my sons like sharing these gifts with me I know your pain

take care


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