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Undone
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There was a man with some spices
He seasoned his food
And cooked it slowly,
He hoped it would not be undone,
And he prayed fear would not ruin this meal.
He raised his voice to the sky
And prayed and marched in peace,
And he whispered as Heaven sang ...
Heaven said, "Preach on,
And your dream will unfurl."
Death visited this holy man
And a huge dark cloud engulfed the sky
And he never tasted his meal,
But others said it was a tasty thing.
Never before had a man
Spoke like this about freedom
Although his dream is still undone.


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 Reviews of "Undone"
Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2002
Yes, his "dream" is still undone!
What a wonderful write!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2002
This is excellent.

I would suggest that rather than breaking this up into stanza's, it would have more impact as one continuous verse.

I wouldn't change a word. It is lovely and insightful.

~E

Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on October 7, 2002
very powerful writing...so well spoken!

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on October 7, 2002
Excellent!!!! enjoyed this much

Reviewed on October 7, 2002
super!!!!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2002
Interesting thoughts you have woven throughout this poem. BTW thanks for dropping by my port.

Reviewed on October 7, 2002
Very nicely-written!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on October 7, 2002
Outstanding...

Thanks
Trixie :)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 6, 2002
awesome!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 6, 2002
Such a creative write the metaphor is incredibly powerfull...

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on October 6, 2002
Makes me think of the 'old testament' in any event, I love your art and you, lots!

Love,Janet xoxoxoxo

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2002
Excellent write ShyPoet1....
very nice.
peggy


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