For all my Brothers and Sisters in arms...then and now
"Like a women who has never given birth, the man who has never faced death and inflicted death, will never for all of his life feel somehow not quite complete."
Gustav Hasford, author of "The Short Timers", later made into the film. "Full Metal Jacket"
Fatigues have turned from green to brown,
From lying on the fetid ground.
Walking in paddies the feet do sink,
Ants, leeches, and three step snakes.
Can't I go home for goodness sakes.
A nasty pit with Punji Stakes.
A "Booby Trap," the line I see,
Across the path in front of me.
I raise my fist to tell my mates,
To lightly step, for death awaits.
Oh no, another hill to climb,
The "World" some other place in time.
Trained to do all that I can,
To guard myself and fellow man.
No don't hand to me that joint,
Because today, I have the point.
Yea it was a nasty, dirty war, BUT they did what they were sent out to do and then the Politicians as usual failed them. The more things change in history, the more some things stay the same--Great dedication. Thanks
Mike
Awesome write Walt. I know you say you're a rookie but I don't believe you. You've been doing this awhile. You ain't got this southern gal fooled! You're a pro. *smiles and hugs* Jean
Walt, images are so real and your words bring your voice to life as I read this. It's sad & heart rendering...no one but those who have fought know these feelings. My heart bleeds for the men & women who are now fighting in other wars. God bless you & everyone of those serving our country. A great write to remind people of what those who serve our country go through.
Wonderful and intensely said WAlt!
My heart goes out to each and every one of them NOW and THEN!
Who sacrificed sooo much for us!
WArmly, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
Walt - you remind us of the hell your fellow service men and women go through each day - fighting for our freedom. Your imagery takes me there. May God continue to bless you and all who protect the U.S.
Been there, did that, never got a T-shirt, but then again I never lost a man to carelessnes or a sniper, maybe I was just a lucky one.
Yes, no joints or booze before going pointing, just a lot of black coffee, better piss a lot than get stitched by punjii for, in drowsiness, let the eyes to blink close longer than they should.
Thanks Walt, all of them will appreciate.
Georg
Excellent capture -- for those of us who were not there, you took us there and put us in their shoes, as uncomfortable as they were: you honor those who served. Well done, Walt.
Not a good position to be in, but I know how everyone took turns and imagine that is how it was with you too. It was truely a very horrid time, but my pride in all the brave soldiers still exists today. On the wall are etched many that I knew and loved.....
This brings us all back in time to when so many fellows like yourself risked daily for their countries orders...only to be treated badly in return. It is great that Nam vets are finally getting the recognition and appreciation that so many should have received so many years ago.
Outstanding depicting of the reality... "The Point Man" made its point and unlocked the doors of understanding of the industrial psychopolitic wars.
I hope that Americans read the military code of discipline, The Martial Code of Laws, and then compare them to The Constitution of The United States of America. Reading those articles and rules, one can understand what is a true soldier, ~ for going somewhere that one doesn't want to go ~ it is not a valiant action, but an obligation under dogmatic rules, which equals to slavery under Martial Law.
Oh Precious! America was so cruel to the Baby Soldiers that fought in Viet Nam! They are HEROES and should be loved, honored, respected and THANKED!!! THANK-YOU FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART! LOVE! Sissy
I've written many poems about Viet Nam. Although I wasn't there I saw the atrocities come over the AP and UPI tapes. It sure turned my world around and gave me respect for the brave ones who were there. This goes for today as well. Nice job Point man!
love,
Susan
All too real & unlike any other ~ Tiny planet in space not able to reconcile with one another ~ And a few go much more than many could ~~respectfully Ted
So sad, and yet it has all of the terrible ingredients that the men in our war are struggling through. You did an excellent job of letting us see their suffering. God help them and I pray for them.
For them we must pray, for their return home safe,
how they will return mentally is another story.
Peace
William
Mike
My heart goes out to each and every one of them NOW and THEN!
Who sacrificed sooo much for us!
WArmly, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
Thank You for sharing this masterfully wrtten tribute!!
Love Tinka
Kathy
Newfie hugs, Rose
Yes, no joints or booze before going pointing, just a lot of black coffee, better piss a lot than get stitched by punjii for, in drowsiness, let the eyes to blink close longer than they should.
Thanks Walt, all of them will appreciate.
Georg
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
As a Veteran myself, I salute you.
Be safe,
Karen
Blessings,
Joyce B.
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Outstanding depicting of the reality... "The Point Man" made its point and unlocked the doors of understanding of the industrial psychopolitic wars.
I hope that Americans read the military code of discipline, The Martial Code of Laws, and then compare them to The Constitution of The United States of America. Reading those articles and rules, one can understand what is a true soldier, ~ for going somewhere that one doesn't want to go ~ it is not a valiant action, but an obligation under dogmatic rules, which equals to slavery under Martial Law.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Love,
ET
Love,
annie
love,
Susan
Hugz,
Dana