Destiny (poem) by Regis Auffray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 15, 2014

Having to like to read this a couple of times, I'm not sure I'd be able to review this, but your destiny is the ending of the straying, but you'll still have sparks without regret and carry on your life letting destiny rule.

Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo

Reviewed on December 8, 2013

Interesting choice of words in the first stanza. As someone already mentioned here this poem could in deed be turned into a short story and this could be the opener for it... Nicely written! Certainly grabs my attention and keeps me wanting to read more and more...

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on April 10, 2012

REGIS...WHAT A GREAT SHARING THIS IS! THE TONE IS SO UPLIFTING. I ENJOYED IT IMMENSELY. THIS REMINDS ME OF ONE OF ASA'S EARLIER POEMS, WITH THE SAME TITLE. HOW DIFFERENTLY POETS LOOK AT THE SAME THEME DEPENDING ON SO...MANY OTHER 'THINGS'. WHEN YOU HAVE THE TIME, PLEASE GO TO HIS DEN AND HAVE A LOOK AT IT. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Nicole Weaver

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

Regis,
I so admire your talent. WOW! this a very powerful poem. I pray that you have found the one who is your destiny.
Nicole

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on June 19, 2009

Hi Reg, I have missed so much having been away from the den all that time... and you are one of the reasons why! It's writing like yours that inspires me, because you give the best definition of "writer". Thank you for sharing such passion.... :)

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on May 23, 2009

Regis,
Seems like this poem could be made into a short story. The imagery is vibrant, and your similes are great. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Milton Handfield

Reviewed on May 13, 2009

A strong determination to reach your destiny. wonderful, captivating the reader's attention again.

cheers
milton

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on July 24, 2008

You make me nuts......this is excellent, you must know this

Reviewed by Patricia Sanders

Reviewed on February 17, 2008

oooh, I really like this one..

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough

Reviewed on June 24, 2007

Passionate, loving, intense. Spellbinding. A brilliant ode to love as a destiny. Thank you Regis for another wonderful read.

Reviewed by Debra Baker

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

You have an explosive talent for romantic poetry. I love the lines "And I shall melt into you," "Like a snowflake in the sea." Bravo, I salute you not only for a beautiful poem, but for the passion described in this write.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on December 31, 2006

' And I shall melt into you Like a snowflake in the sea' I like this sentence, it is beautiful, talented. Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran

Reviewed on June 2, 2005

lovely write!

Reviewed by Seth Mullins (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2005

A diary entry from a traveler on the road to the Spirit. This poem aptly warns of the ensnarements lurking along that road without losing sight of the self-fulfillment that awaits one at the journey's end. You've captured the soul's longing, Regis; the quest for one's true self and unique destiny. Well done.

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on April 21, 2005

This is Uni- with a 0 attached! Awesome reflections into love and destiny- I liked walking into your mind and feeling the spirit of you come alive. Thank you Regi- just getting to know you, and I like your style... HuGs-Lady,Sheee

Reviewed by Sherry Gibson

Reviewed on March 4, 2005

Regis,
You contiue to stun me with your words but even more with your understanding of life. A beautiful write, as all the others I've read here this evening.

Sherry

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on February 27, 2005

Glorious!

Vesna:)

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on February 8, 2005

Great piece Regis, destiny does call and obstacles do get in the way. Can't keep a good man down. G

Reviewed by Sandra Corona

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Wow! Beautiful art and verse! Bravo!
:)Sandy

Reviewed by Safi Abdi

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

The last stanza captures very well your poetic understanding of destiny. The imagery is great!
Safi

Reviewed by Pearl Blevins

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

A very well written poem with deep emotion in the easy flowing words. Pearl

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

Bravo, poet!

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

Regis, as you know I am new to AD and don't know anyone here, their immediate backgrounds, their styles of writing, their histories... But two things struck me after reading *Destiny.* (1) You are loved by the people who populate Authors Den. To be so universally admired can only mean there's a good man behind the words. (2) After reading this piece (along with several others of your's) I can see the good man/heart for myself.

*Destiny* flows smoothly off my tongue when reading it aloud. For me, that's an important aspect in reading poetry. How a piece is read lends to the atmosphere of the story behind the words.

Your words evoked imagery and I could see that sharp distant peak, your goal, with my mind's eye. By the time I reached the last words, I realized that we've shared the same destiny a time or two even if at different times in our lives. *Destiny* truly resonated.

edit: I love the picture that accompanies the poem. Very cool.

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

And I shall melt into you
Like a snowflake in the sea
For you are
My destiny

Regis, perhaps you feel as I do- amazed at what appears in our own hearts when we just attempt to touch love.
I never feel like I can really take credit for what comes, I just try to catch it.
With the above lines I hope you don't mind my saying I just felt like it was a toss up as to which one of us would find them first.
It is so what I feel, but you got those lines this time.
Good catch.
John

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

Dear Regis,

A superb write! Your second stanza is so full of lifes truths, showing how easy it is to become distracted, (I daresay though, when committment is not sincere) the flow into the last stanza is so encouraging, and heartfelt, knowing that with perserverance, love can be, not only achieved, but felt, held, mutually enjoyed and respected.

A very wise and touching poem Regis :)

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

Another awesome write!

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

What a lovely destiny you have.
Splendid penning!

Best wishes

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Regis,

Absolutely stunning! Love the imagery and the flow of this timeless masterpiece. Thank you for sharing this gem! Awesome graphic to compliment your poetic art!

Cynthia

Reviewed by Pier Tyler

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Powerful, thought-provoking, dipped in sensuality, that could be pertaining to relationships or life itself.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

It doesn't get better than this Regis! Such images and force.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

WWWOOOOOWWWW!!! Do you get the impression you've struck gold with this one, Regis?! How do you DO that - even for you, this has just that je ne sais quoi which transcends it, to melt like your snowflake into the destiny of the sea of each of our souls - individually and corporately! Perfection: unique and deftly crafted - just love the "hook" at the end. Mystical, "out there", but deep "in here" as well. Graphic fascinating and the defining complement. Totally knock out, Champ!! TY indeed, LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

my baby cousins' name
love the metaphor here
so mystical and passionate!!!
out~done

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

Now I must do a TRASK quote here because it's the only way I can put it: "Wildy Romantic!" LOL

Loved your imagery and the passion of this penning, Reg.

Reviewed by Nila Jamier (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

Awesome poetry and tale and this art is exquisite:)
Nila

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

Regis, You are AWESOME! This has captured every moment on the road of destiny. Yet never losing site of the distant peak .Magnificent! I'll rewrite the whole poem if I pick out everything I Love here. So read your poem and you'll see all the things i love
I will melt into you, like a snowflake in the sea.
Oh Regis this is Just Beautiful and so romantic as life really is and you've captured in Perfectly!
You are Magnifcnet! what an eye your mind has. Beautiful!
I Love Yer Stuff! and You.
Love Tracey xoox

Reviewed by jacqueline amos

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

This is so beautiful you have a kind heart, your wisdom is visable, and your words speak from the inner soul.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

Regis this is a masterpiece, I can't begin to tell you how much I like it. You have blended a deep longing and ache for someone just out of reach with the hope and promise of a reunion as lovingly as any I have known. This is one of your best.

Felix

Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

Wow - like a quest for the Holy Grail this reads, so magnificently epic for something many of us think is so simply but isn't - love's true fate. So exquisite - thanks for sharing!
Monette

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

EXQUISITE, my kind friend
Your talent soars in this poem...
Excellent indeed!

~Linda

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

Regis,

Crafted to poetic excellence my friend - you wield your pen with the skill of an expert swordsman ... Bravo!!

Best always,

Robert

Reviewed by Huda Orfali

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

Very beautiful, Regis
I love the image of snowflake melting in the sea, sweet and profound
Love and peace
Huda

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

Regis:

This is sooooo very good. I applaud this. This also has a sensual touch. Lovely inspiring write indeed.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

Regis,
I agree with Kate and Karla, one of your best...a masterful, sunsual, stunning write...
~Carole

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

Regis,

I agree with Kate--this is one of your best! Sensual...yearning...richly imaged...STUNNING work and art! BRAVO, mon ami!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

This is one of your best!

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

You do have a way with words my friend...Excellent piece! ~Z~

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

A stunning, powerful write, and that art work is amazing.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

Just simply awesome Regis!!

Warm love Tinka

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

I do lead me astray!... Simply beautiful, Regis. Wonderful imagery, masterfully crafted.
Best,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

excellent and thought provoking write, mon ami! c'est bon!

(((HUGS))) and much love, ton ami en texas, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

Delightful imagery in this profound poem

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

This was beautiful Regis, absolutely outstanding and lovely poetry,

Reindeer

Reviewed by D May (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

Oh--this is wonderful. Nicely done Regis.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

I believe you will persevere, Regis, and this is a wonderful poem.

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

Dear Regis,

Superb rendition filled with passion & tenderness. I loved your use of metaphor to develop the imagery. I also personally found this to be inspirational and encouraging.

"And I shall melt into you
Like a snowflake in the sea
For you are
My destiny"

*sigh* You would melt anyone with these words.

With love Chanti

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

Absolutley stunning write Regis you have such talent my friend.

Paul;-}

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

the recognition and acceptance of the inevitable, in the sense of love's deep alluring nature, is expressed with sensitivity ... yet this wonderful poem has a profound sense of vivacity to it ... luv the snowfalke and sea image ...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

Boys gotta do what a boys gotta do...

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

Well penned Regis
a lovely piece

William ....Peace & Love

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

Your destiny and hers together, sound quite powerful...Ed

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

Absolutely gorgeous, Regis

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

WOW Regis, You did right by this one

Reviewed by Judith Bailey

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

My road has all those twists and sidepaths too, including the barkers, the clowns. Still, being the prickly separatist, I have to say my road can parallel yours in many places, but is always MY road... heh heh (so much for romancing a cactus..)
Loved the rhythm of it, smooth.
judith

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

Destiny Is Narrow Path You Walk On Placed By (God) You As I (All)Must Follow It To The Your End-- Why You as I Will Preserve,i.e.
Persevere

Excellent.

TRASK_

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

regis,

what a pathological trip
through love's doorway

thanks,
d.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

Regis it's all been said this exceptional poem
is one of your best! totally Mesmerizing!

love,eileen

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

Absolutely beautiful Regis!
How do you do it so?
Thank you for this exquisite piece.
Becca

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

Yes this is quite awesome Regis and impressive.