Take my words with you Oh wind Fly them to my love But when you speak to her Do not be your stormy self Be a gentle breeze Whisper sweetly in her ear “I love you from you know who” While you’re at it Give her a kiss for me
So very simple and warm hearted. To love and to have the wind as an agent to it is magical--this is a spell of the soul to carry a love, and I am sure your companion did recieve it well....
A VERY SWEET THOUGHT FROM THE HEART... PHRASES AND IMAGERY ARE GENTLE AND TENDER. DONE WELL AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Love this one, Regis! The imagery pops and the idea is unique. You personify the wind beautifully. This one goes in my library! Love and Hugs~
Sheila
Reviewed by Meredith Dixon (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2006
Someone who loves me, PLEASE, send this poem to me in a Valentine. Regis, this is so deeply simple and so very beautiful and this comes from your heart and oh, blessed woman who receives this on the wind from your loving heart. To be thought of like this............well, once I was!!! (: Thanks for this beautiful love poem even if wasn't meant for me. We women can just print it out and tell others that it was meant for us!!! Love and God bless, Meredith
You might not be able to physically fly BUT your words fly high and make us sigh...ah!
Reviewed by Theresa Rayman (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2005
Oh what a wonderful feeling this little verse imparts! I love the sweet, whimsical, language you used and I really like the title. Thank you for sharing this. Thank you also for the kind reviews of my poems too!
Take Care-TGR
Reviewed by S H (Reader)
Reviewed on August 1, 2005
Oh, if only someone would think those words about me. Very sweet poem, but then you always write like that.
Oh, so gorgeous, Regis. This reminds me of all my Spanish vibes, based a lot on writing by Paulo Coehlo in The Alchemist. And don't we just feel like this - that the elements DO connect us all, one with another, across the miles and distances we're apart? A delightful greeting. Bless you, Kate xx
A very gentle a well written poem. As always well done and a beautiful read.
Reviewed by Tracey O' (Reader)
Reviewed on July 31, 2005
Beautiful Poem and I love the way you make sure it has no fears there made me smile. only reminding love and a kiss carried gently by the wind. Beautiful heart touching poem of your longing soul.
TIG
Superbly short sweet and outstandingly romantic Regis...Excellent
Paul;-)
Reviewed by Pacific Ink (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2005
This so smooth and beautiful...nice romantic mood dispensed! BTW I am not sure about "Zephyr"(which already means gentle breeze), you can perhaps zephyr-->breeze.
I just love the honey-sweetness of this, Regis. Beautiful thoughts from your kind and loving heart.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on July 29, 2005
Regis ,
I hope I don't sound like a repititous
recording; The fact is, I love your work
and You're quite talented and this poem
is yet one more contribution of beautiful expression.
PEACE AND LOVE AND MAY JESUCRISTO bless us all always,
Rich Criso Suarez
Romantic and so beautiful
Gentle as a breeze
Thanks for sharing
love and peace
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 29, 2005
Yeah and one for me too. But different lass that is...
When I met my girl she said I was the best man, the she met my best friend, HUH I still was the best man. The best man at their wedding.
Such a gentle poem, more like a gentle breeze than wind..
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Seriously, this is so soft and tender, and simply beautiful.
Joni
Your lady must be the luckiest woman in the whole world....
Helen
This is just beautiful Regis. A perfect gem.
warm hugs
Elga
cheers!
William ....Peace & Love
Take Care-TGR
Abdinoor
Reindeer
TIG
I enjoyed.
Love, Bonnie
good write
pax,
john+
Paul;-)
Pacific
Take care
Peace and love, Carole
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
same message to carry to my love wherever
she may be.
you always please Regis......
Love,
Eileen
ann
Since you cannot fly...who says you can't? You just did, with this magnificent poem! Short, but succinct; dammit, I wish I'd written this winner!
Thanks for the kiss--returning one right back to you. MWAHH! :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Take care,
Sherry
Regis ,
I hope I don't sound like a repititous
recording; The fact is, I love your work
and You're quite talented and this poem
is yet one more contribution of beautiful expression.
PEACE AND LOVE AND MAY JESUCRISTO bless us all always,
Rich Criso Suarez
Ron
Love TinkaSweets ;P
Gentle as a breeze
Thanks for sharing
love and peace
When I met my girl she said I was the best man, the she met my best friend, HUH I still was the best man. The best man at their wedding.
Such a gentle poem, more like a gentle breeze than wind..
neat Romantic Write On!
TRASK