I truely love how you used the symbolism of a butterfly for the one who left this heart in tears. I say that because of the meaning behind the butterly: How it transforms and then flys away!! No wonder we use the butterfly in the phrase: If you love someone you will let them go?
I could go on and on with all the thoughts your poem has stirred in me! I just love it!
Thank you sweet Regis*
IMPRESSIVE. AS MUCH AS IT HURTS...IF YOU HAVE 'LEARNED' AND BECAME WISER IN THE PROCESS THEN...YOUR WORST MISTAKE...BECOMES YOUR BEST MISTAKE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
This is a very emotional and touching poem. It is beautifully written and I think that others might relate to the content in some way. I sure do. Thanks so much for sharing this piece. I much enjoyed the read. Keep on writing. It is your calling.
Very inspiring poem, you found the light through your darkness. Well Done!!!
Reviewed by Donna DeLong Matthews (Reader)
Reviewed on October 20, 2009
Regis This is awesome. Yes love should lie upon the heart as a butterfly getting all the sweetness we as humans lust for.
I loved this
Hugs and Luv
Donna
Regis,
This is another great rendering,and you are right:There are many types of addictions,and unfortunately,all of them weaken us wouldn't you agree?
To your continued success/
Barbara Henry
Filled with unmet desires; this one is very beautiful in its sad portrayal of one heart left behind by the elusive "butterfly."
Yet it seems to be a relationship that never got off the ground. Let it drift away into a gentle memory, then, and look ahead.
Connie
Love the picture and the way you wrote about love in this poem
Reviewed by Dixie Dawn Michelle (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2009
The emotions and the wording are on the poetic pot. They touch my heart.
The image of a butterfly in human's life can only suit the libidinal emotions. But there was the innocence that learn to be wise; and the closing stanza shows that.
this poem is wonderfully addictive Regis -- ah, butterflies, I will in fact admit to having a special fascination for these delicate messengers of beauty and tranquil actions -- love the photo -- love the poem -- and with that I will flit away -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael
Everyone has come in contact with a butterfly at some point in their lives. So beautiful, yet simple. Love it.
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2009
I've been addicted to so many things in my life; but I haven't tried butterflies.....yet. Sounds a little like Ectasy. Time to get the net out and start hunting. Nice poem. Enjoyed the message. By the way, mistakes are never mistakes if the journey is continued, just learning experiences.
Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
Reviewed on July 29, 2009
Reg, you have one of the biggest hearts, therefore that big heart can become easily broken (Addicted) so I pray as you do:
I pray I have not embraced
the worst of mistakes
on my journey...
Addicted, we all have our addictions, I choose love over all things, what so bad about loving someone, it is a feeling to embrace and feel alive about. Your poem touches my heart, Reg.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
An amazing poem, Regis. There's something to be said about a passionate person who gives his/her all in a relationship - so much that it threatens to consume. This is how a girl dreams she'll be loved when she grows up. Hugs,
Sheila
This is a very beautiful, heart-searing poem, Regis. One that speaks to all of us whose hearts and souls are so open and vulnerable, still searching both heavens and earth for some kind of safe anchorage. We attach so easily to all forms of beauty and vitality, as our souls see it, so richly and diversely displayed in others and in the world around us, and a part of us melts. I can so very much relate to the feelings you express so vividly for us here. Bless you, Kate xx
Beautiful comments about love, and a butterfly is lovely, all kinds of them. They are my favorites too and can lead to love at all times. So neat a poem. Addictive.
ohhh the slice of a soul..."Addicted"....lingering in the memories of love, seeing love everywhere...needing this love...no calming words can sooth the restlessness of emotions....
You move me with this Regis! Your words of emotions gripping my heart with each line...
My Love Always xo
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
Such a beautifully, enchanting poem, Reg! The title is SOOO apropo to the message...that many of us have experienced. I love this...it's a keeper!!
Blessings and Love - Micke
It seems I've lived my entire life in a state of addiction and loving it. Ain't no way I'm going to rehab. That would cut out
all the fun and passion in life. But my addictions aren't all bad,
you understand, like I'm addicted to Authorsden. But who isn't?
With great writers like you, Reg, I'm enjoying being "Addicted."
A terrific poem, and as I look at the picture I wonder if your addiction is for the human butterfly or the insect butterfly. Either way, you describe your addiction so well.
The butterfly is the perfect metaphor, Regis, their life so elusive and captivating yet so brief. Should we ever fall in love with a butterfly, surely, we will feel the sting of loss before we fully understand that they have burrowed into all of the empty spaces in our heart.
Take care,
Sherry
Tres bien, mon ami, tres bien!! {sorry 'bout the missing accents}.
Make that tres, tres, TRES. So touching. So much said in a few exquisitely chosen words. Form's very like a butterfly. Encore!
Encore!! Toujours, 'Pi':)
I love the way you describe each phaze of the relationship, starting "like a sunburn , when finally felt it is too late." I guess there are worse things to be addicted to than love, but probably not many as painful. Enjoyed!
Perhaps at the time you was a lotus flower in a water pond where carps gave a few blotches of red to the deep blues. No wonder the butterfly elected you...
Well done. I really don't know many people who haven't had this addiction at least once in their lives. And as the poets say, "it's a sweet madness" that's, well, not always so sweet. You make that quite clear, which is a service to all of us.
Well, Regis, you don't write as many poems as I know you would like to, but when you do, they are so darn good :) This is how we all feel, I think, when we love, as Sage said.
Robert Palmer sings Addicted To Love so we might as well face it. Now Reg, a butterfly flits from here to there and it is well known it is elusive. It's why we keep on chasing it. It's well worth our valuable time to keep up the chase because time says there is a special butterfly out there that will stay perched with its proboscis aimed at the nectar and it will keep on coming back to the sweet...The answer comes to me when Stella Stevens sings Butterfly Morning in the movie The Ballad of Cable Hogue, a good old Sam Pekinpah classic just like this poem you have written. Be well, Regis.
the strongest addictions are those which insert us with passion, once amiss is an enduring withdrawal, and its power we are totally unaware of ... i like this concept as well as delivery, Regis ...
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I could go on and on with all the thoughts your poem has stirred in me! I just love it!
Thank you sweet Regis*
Your friend,
Michelle
All the best,
Lena
I loved this
Hugs and Luv
Donna
This is another great rendering,and you are right:There are many types of addictions,and unfortunately,all of them weaken us wouldn't you agree?
To your continued success/
Barbara Henry
fantastic too! I am sorry she left
you, "addicted"!
Beckers
Very touching,
margaret
BRAVO!
John Michael
Yet it seems to be a relationship that never got off the ground. Let it drift away into a gentle memory, then, and look ahead.
Connie
The image of a butterfly in human's life can only suit the libidinal emotions. But there was the innocence that learn to be wise; and the closing stanza shows that.
In gratitude,
Dixie Dawn Michelle
keep up the writing
Take care Ankin T.
GP:)
Thanks
Steph
I pray I have not embraced
the worst of mistakes
on my journey...
Be well my friend, Holly
is, it had to go through a process, the Lord will see you
through!
Blessings!!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Love and Blessings,
Christine
TRASK...
Mark
EDWIN
Beautifully, elegantly written.
John
Sheila
Ron
Jimmy Rogers song lyrics popped in my head -
"You tell me you love me,
you say you were true,
but you fly around
with somebody new -
you - BUTTERFLY ..."
Then - there's "Butterfly Kisses" - the wispy touch of gossamer wings ...
REMEMBER THO -
each rejection brings one closer to
the NEXT ACCEPTANCE ... TK.
ann
This is a wonderful poem, dilightgful and fanciful in the beginning and soulful and heartwrenching toward the end!! I loved it.
Love n' stuff
Micki Peluso
Sandie Angel :o)
You move me with this Regis! Your words of emotions gripping my heart with each line...
My Love Always xo
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
Leland
Blessings and Love - Micke
It seems I've lived my entire life in a state of addiction and loving it. Ain't no way I'm going to rehab. That would cut out
all the fun and passion in life. But my addictions aren't all bad,
you understand, like I'm addicted to Authorsden. But who isn't?
With great writers like you, Reg, I'm enjoying being "Addicted."
Richard
Cheers,
Dan
Carole~
As always, very well written.
Nicole
Take care,
Sherry
Make that tres, tres, TRES. So touching. So much said in a few exquisitely chosen words. Form's very like a butterfly. Encore!
Encore!! Toujours, 'Pi':)
(((HUGS))) et amour, ton ami dans Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
Georg
Beautifully written,
Take Care, Pierre
Susan
With Love,
Cindy
Love,
Sage
Daniel
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.