As I was reading, "She Called," each word carried me on a journey, a journey, a journey seeking all things wonderful...what a ride to possibilities. Thanks for sharing, Regis.
This is a good poem but I am not sure about the repetition of phrases three times in each stanza though. I think the poem would be more affective if they didn't repeat as much.
This is a very soft and gentle write, Regis. For me, this is the beginning of trusting someone again after having been hurt. It happens little by little, with another's kindness or insight. Thanks for sharing this. Love and Hugs,
Sheila
Keeping her in the current, Reg...freeing the dog salmon or freeing herself for the man, either way...it's a good woman who can unthaw an inlet to the heart...be well...
REGIS!! This is a really awesome style of poetic expression
the way you add to the lines like you did
does it have a name? I will like to try this...
Groovy Baby!!
and your words....they stayed focused & beautifully flowing
Love & Hugzz
Vickie
Dearest Regis,
You are brilliant the way you have developed each line... displaying the way your heart blossoms so beautifully in love... sharing the wonderful workings of your thought patterns coinciding with your heart's impulses!!
Thank you so much for sharing your gift with us!
Love and Gratitude,
Suzie :-D
Very different,and so perfect for your conclusion,because it made the essence of her call come to life. Splendid Regis!I hope the stream continues to flow,and the possibilities too!
...THE RIGHT WORDS...AT THE RIGHT TIME...BY THE RIGHT PERSON...
IT REALLY CAN'T GET ANY BETTER THAN THAT. WELL WRITTEN AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Now you are open to the sea
of possibilities! I am so happy for you!
I am glad you got her message. You
conveyed much hope in the message. Good for you!
Love ya!
Becca
I love the structure and how each stanza flows into the next. The message in this poem Reg is a good one and a very important one. It tells me that words can be soothing and relaxing, and can wash away, if only for a few moments, all the troubles that we carry inside. This is wonderfully written with a wonderful message. If I had to rate this I would give it a 10 out of 10. Than kyou for sharing this with us.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your den sister, Barbie.
the metamorphosis of a doubtful heart now given to love and trust -- a refreshing take on the romance theme -- loved it -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael
Cold hearted orb that rules the night
Removes the colors from our sight
Black is yellow and yellow white
But we determine what is right
And what is an illusion...Moody blues
Uniquely romantic, Regis; I love the lines and their repetitions and lengthenings, the drawing out not of the words only but of the feelings and responses and their development ending in "...a stream of hope towards a sea of possibilites."
This reminds us that simple words of kindness and encouragement can change someone's world if not their entire outlook on life. Very nice, Reg.
Take care,
Sherry
It's amazing what can happen when we loosen the chains of restraint and allow our creative juices to flow. This poem, along with the picture are a perfect match. Well done!
I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work.
I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of
hugs
Kathi
Brynn
Thanks for sharing.
Lena
Axilea
~Madison.
Susan
Love TinkaSweets
Sheila
Love,
Sage
the way you add to the lines like you did
does it have a name? I will like to try this...
Groovy Baby!!
and your words....they stayed focused & beautifully flowing
Love & Hugzz
Vickie
I THINK THIS COULD BE PUT TO MUSIC.
Doug
Be always safe,
Karen
In a word. . .excellent!!
Micki Peluso
You are brilliant the way you have developed each line... displaying the way your heart blossoms so beautifully in love... sharing the wonderful workings of your thought patterns coinciding with your heart's impulses!!
Thank you so much for sharing your gift with us!
Love and Gratitude,
Suzie :-D
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Love and hugs,
Eileen
Anna
ONLY ONE WORD ... MAGNIFIQUE !!!
TOM.
praised the uniquely repetitive style of this unusual
and excellent poem. -gene.
RON
Daniel
IT REALLY CAN'T GET ANY BETTER THAN THAT. WELL WRITTEN AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
What can I say other than, your style
works out well.
Could be the start of a new trend in writing
Keep those words whirling like gossamers.
Stephen pollard
of possibilities! I am so happy for you!
I am glad you got her message. You
conveyed much hope in the message. Good for you!
Love ya!
Becca
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your den sister, Barbie.
What a blessing thanks for sharing!
Much Love!
Always!!
Removes the colors from our sight
Black is yellow and yellow white
But we determine what is right
And what is an illusion...Moody blues
Nice to see your colors Regis. Patrick
I really like this...melted the iceberg that was my soul which became a stream of hope towards a sea of possibilities!
A wonderful piece! Thanks for sharing it.
Sudo Nym
Poet in Motion
Blessings and love,
Susan
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Very fine work.
John
Take care,
Sherry
This one took my breath away! Simply divine, very well expressed mon ami.
Nicole
What an uplifting love poem, and to have someone give you meaning to your life.
Mary
Cheers,
Dan
These words take us for a ride into meaning.
An experience here.
John
A man stopping and looking back, at was
love and hugs
mary etta
Christine
(((HUGS))) et amour, ton ami dans Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.