No Wrap Rap... (poem) by Regis Auffray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 19, 2014

Rapping, Wrapping - I'm with you here on this one Regis, so many good expressions pertaining to your feelings. Enjoyed this one very much.

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on March 5, 2011

Regis!!! You did a great job on this loved it
hug
Kat

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on February 23, 2011

I hope she looks your way, definitely her loss if she doesn't.

Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo

Reviewed on February 23, 2011

Not sure if this is the AD editor malfunctioning or if it is intentional but you've got two different font sizes in your poem. The line "and you were asking for more" and others after it are bigger in size than the lines before it.

The poem (aka your rhymed rap) is catchy but it does not have perfect flow and as you know I am all about perfect flow... You should try to perfect it. :)

I love the content of the rap. Definitely something people can relate to. I wonder if this is a raw unedited rap or if you've tweaked it.

Lena

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Reviewed on February 17, 2011

This is what rap was, originally; a nice flow of words to define an emotion, set to flow like this. Very creative, Regis!

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on February 17, 2011

Very well done, Regis.
May your version of "rap" spark a much needed revolution.
Be Well, Poet,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on February 16, 2011

I am not a fan of rap either and in fact think it is obscene. But this poem touches the heart because it was written from the heart of a man who loves his woman so. Thank you for sharing this beautiful Valentine.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on February 15, 2011

Reg,

This was really cute. But I have to say, it's not exactly your style.

Mary

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on February 14, 2011

I LIKE YOUR RAP... 'CAUSE IT'S NOT ABOUT THE 'WRAPPING' BUT ABOUT THE GIFT...WHICH IS YOUR 'RAP'...AND YOU'VE ALWAYS 'RAPPED' WELL AND I'VE ALWAYS ENJOYED IT...NO MATTER HOW IT HAPPENS TO BE 'WRAPPED'. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on February 13, 2011

A rap that has no wrap.. Oh what a fantastic verse! enjooyed this veeeery much dear Regis.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Parker

Reviewed on February 12, 2011

Very touching, Regis!

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on February 11, 2011

oh wow! such a flow..I could 'hear' the beat, Regis. Rap or not, this is intense and urgent and I wonder who inspired such passion...may she be within your reach and may she heed you!

Gina

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings

Reviewed on February 10, 2011

Wonderful gift Regis filled with creativity and it is flows from deep within! Thank you for sharing and for caring! Happy Valentine day Regis!

Much Love,
Margaret

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on February 10, 2011

Very sweet indeed sweet man...Hugsss

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on February 9, 2011

you make your readers feel
this as & is a personal experience Regis!!

Love & Blessings Always
Vickiex o

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 9, 2011

well done, Regis ... pleasure to read you again ...

Reviewed by John Coppolella

Reviewed on February 8, 2011

So timely. The rhythm of the verses rocking me back and forth, making me feel the feeling and ached of the burn. Not being there except in spirit hoping the other person knows just how much they have meant to you. Must be a special someone to inspire you to write a poem like this.

I enjoyed this so much.

Starman

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 8, 2011

you can rap with the best of them, Reg! Fantastic!

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on February 8, 2011

Its a good write for someone who is not a wrapper....M

Reviewed by bluecornflower orangetiger

Reviewed on February 7, 2011

rap on. Mary

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on February 7, 2011

splendid rap verse destined to knock the panties off any aspiring muse:-)

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on February 7, 2011

I'm not into Rap either, my friend, but this is sweet....I can almost hear this one being performed....great job, Regis.

Anna

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on February 6, 2011

Nice, Regis. I like the way each thought developed and then took off in another direction. Great job.
S

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

Reviewed on February 6, 2011

this is outstanding it should be recorded

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron

Reviewed on February 6, 2011

That's something neat to "rap" my brain arouhd....

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on February 6, 2011

...that wraps it up ! wow..I read this as a rap..bravo Reg!!!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2011

phewww...wow, nice one, am sure this 'she' won't take any chance for the fear of no 'wrap' !!! :) best wishes.neerja

Reviewed by KJ McPhee

Reviewed on February 5, 2011

Eminem may be interested in setting this to music, reg! Rap can be creative, after all, just take out the anger and offensiveness to minorities, and you have REG RAP! Ha! Well done, brother!

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on February 5, 2011

Nice one!
I'll tell you a secret Regis... Sshhh...I love rap! Ha!
Christine

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 5, 2011

clever!

Reviewed by Daniel Keith

Reviewed on February 5, 2011

This is a great poem Regis. I had my wife read it, and she said to tell you that she felt the love flowing from your words. May God bless you every day of your life.

Daniel

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on February 5, 2011

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by lili dauphin

Reviewed on February 5, 2011

This is wonderful. I hope she's reading this. Good luck Regis.

Reviewed by Micki Peluso

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

Regis, this was beautiful and heartwrenching. This woman must be crazy to turn you away. The last time I got love poems was from my boyfriend, now husband in High school.

Hugs and hopes for you,

Micki

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

I like it no matter what you want to call it! Morgan

Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

634-5789 call my number...oh yeh. I'm liking this, but I'm singing the blues. Happy Valentine Day1

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

wat up dawg? I think you got it down somewhat fancier than rap.

Reviewed by Lew Duffey

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

WOW... What a valentine.
God bless,
Lew

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

Very nicely done, Regis.

Peace
Tony

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

Rap is rap. I'll pass on it.

Reviewed by Steve Groll

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

It's rap without the cra... I like it.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

Regis, sounds like rap to me. So rap on... gene.

Reviewed by stan nassano

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

hey nice job there,Reg, i hear ya ..now i'm feeling da beat bro..........

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

No crap either. It's nice to bare one's soul.

Ron

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

Nicely done, Regis.

Reviewed by karen logan

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

I too am not a fan of rap, however, there are some very charming rappers and you could be one. I like Trevie McCoy, not because we share the same last name but because he speaks of compassion and understanding. Its a different understanding then I know but he means to help. Your a great person Regis. Love and Light. Your friend Karen

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

Great flow and warm message, perfect for the season. Nice job Reg.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

You have the beat down pat.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

Snoop Dog Auffray, has a nice ring to it doesn't it? Patrick

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

I can honestly say I was not signing on to look at Regis latest rap.
But- actually I was.
I really can not imagine touching this style- but you aced it as far as I can tell- this really works.
Is there some style you haven't mastered?

John

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

I added music to this and stomped my foot to the beat...it worked out pretty good...e