God (whoever you are) I love you
You are on top and nothing is above you
But I here below
(For one) would really like to know
You better
I believe you are there
And that you will receive this prayer
By letter
Not of the law but of my hand
Not much to say but only just
A little note from me to you because I must
Because I believe you understand
Look down and see that this is only
Me looking up and feeling lonely
Where we have met before
And I am too hard to get along with to be
Successful in relationships apparently
Of which I want no more
(Entangling alliances seem what they are)
Whereas you God are cooler than a distant star
Classical and noble and objective
While I am romantic and poor and subjective
You are on top and nothing is above you
God (whoever you are) I love you
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