Yes, Paul, a playful side to you. I've seen this side before and it shines in this piece now. Very creative with a dream-like quality to it. Love the rhyme scheme and rhythm! Well done:) Sheila
And perhaps sail across the desert sand
what an adventure, wouldn't it be grand?
This is a good poem, it reminds me of pretty much every guy I have ever met when the first line out of their mouth is.."I own ocean front property in Arizona, Can I buy you a drink?"
A dreamer like me then, Paul ;)
This makes me smile. An excellent poem.
Chrissie
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
Paul, This is so good and fantasy I would say Morning.
"Don't believe a word I say
I did this all in just one day
Perhaps tomorrow, If I get the notion
I'll drive across the Atlantic Ocean "
Peggy
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
Walk across it if you can. Funny made me think of some of the whoppers I've heard of late.
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what an adventure, wouldn't it be grand?
This is a good poem, it reminds me of pretty much every guy I have ever met when the first line out of their mouth is.."I own ocean front property in Arizona, Can I buy you a drink?"
Excellent read.
Regis
Whatever, dream on.
Love,
Sandy
~Kelie~
LOL...I love this...
Trixie :)
--Karissa
I must write something light..one day.....Ty, Dani
This makes me smile. An excellent poem.
Chrissie
"Don't believe a word I say
I did this all in just one day
Perhaps tomorrow, If I get the notion
I'll drive across the Atlantic Ocean "
Peggy