A spooky feel.... I intend to avoid this place completely! Although, I think I heard a rumor or two about it...may have just been a lunatic raving. Surprised me with the ending on this one! Two thumbs up!
Good poem Paul but the marshy moor already got me. When i married my wife i was caught in it. Now i'm trying to keep from drowning.
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Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Sounds like a woods to stay away from. Great write!
Sheila
...and thank you for your comment on my dream ship. ;) Silver
~Jackie~
In Spirit,
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~Nikki~
Tami
But i have no clue who or what Marchy Moor is about!!
Love Tinka
It has never been!
LOL!
Nevine
LM
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This is an outstanding poetical work. "Marshy Moor". I liked its speed and flowing.
Thank You.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
No Marshy Moors for me...but YOU ARE EXCELLENT Paul! THis is very dark and exciting to read.
Thank you,
Emilie
Kudos!
tony
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)