Return To Marshy Moor (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 5, 2007

A strong sequel. Yes, similar to "Haggards' Halls" but this series has more of a lascivious feel; enticed by a different sort of lure...lol. Well penned! -Sheila

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

Love your creativity Paul;-)...always a joy to read your flawless meter and rhyme....

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

I can feel the strange forms within...lurking.

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

This is excellent Paul, I loved it. Great rhyme and flow too.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

LOL...now Paul you do not...do you hear me DO NOT HAVE A SICK OLE MIND!!!!
This lil two piecer here just like Haggards Halls is so brilliant and fantastic. I always ALWAYS love to read your tales spun within poetry!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

Truer words never spoken in a more bonnie rhyme!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

Thanks for telling me more about "Marshy Moor"...hehehe...!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

I agree, I wanted to read more of this. Has me intrigued.

Reviewed by J. Murphy

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

Your imagination was fun to read--is there more about it? J.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

good write, paul; truly enjoyed! :D (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn.

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

a great write..Floreann

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

Great addition to your series :-)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

I liked this, excellent tales you weave here!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

I think I've been there! *grin* Another great write Paul! ~SH~

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

I agree...this could be a novel. Great story...and thank you for your comment on my poem. I agree there too. ;) Silver

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

A great return to an intimidating place. Well written.
Kudos!

tony

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

"Return To Marshy Moor"... This is a fantatstic story. This could be developed into a Novel. I read "Marshy Moor" and that is the reason that I came out with this idea... Some Interplanetary Visitors could be considered Welcomed to live and "Return To Marshy Moor" .

This is an inspiring piece indeed. Keep on Poet!

HAPPY BLESSED DAY.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

How true is this:))