Foresight Is Hindsight or A Bowl of Fantasy (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Louise Bohmer (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

I had a good chuckle when I read this. :) I must say I respect your ability to rhyme so fluidly! I have always struggled with that aspect of poetry.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on November 1, 2003

This was great Paul, very funny and true!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on October 31, 2003

Paul, I hope you don't mind but I printed this out to give my sons. When they were young they used to have contests to see who could eat the "hottest" anything. this brought back some fond memories.
Bobbi

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on October 31, 2003

I rememeber once I ate a stew like that and I was in bed for a week afterward,I was ssssoooooooooooo sick.
This poem is hilarious! I loved it!
Thanks for making me laugh.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 31, 2003

Paul this is brilliant work my friend!

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on October 31, 2003

Spicy hot, this pepper sauce,
It shot right out my a**, of course.

YEs..one becomes the 'South wind' quite easily..LOL!!!!

great write..thoroughly enjoyed it!! ty

Vesna

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

Paul...lol...thanks a lot...wonderful write!!!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

This is so funny...after Tinka's mice

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

Paul you exploded the den with this wisdom!;-) Great write!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

Hahahaah Outstanding work Paul....it "blew" me away.....LOL>....floria

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

Glad the mouse did not visit..hehehehhe!!

Hot suprize...lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

And we all learn this, the hard way... ha... too funny....
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

{{{{Paul}}}}
You have without a doubt set my afternoon about just right! Oh my this is to funny and precious with real true human wisdom to just idley pass by. I am still laughing my a.. off at this one you funny poet man! ;O)
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

Paul,
Goodmorning,
'Once I sat beneath a tree,
To eat a bowl of fantasy.
Spicy hot, this pepper sauce,
It shot right out my a**, of course."
this was a fantasic poem
peg

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

Hi Paul,
Thanks for the laugh..hehehe
Just what the doctor ordered... :)

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

Cute write! I laughed my head off!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

Put you hands to your back and back away 10 yards. Face foreward. Now stand there while I throw bread in your direction. Great write :-)

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

LOL
I love spicy food!!! this is adorable, got me smiling!!!
ty for the bread advise...learn something ne wevery day!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

Loved this humorous poem, Paul. Extremely well done.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

"Foresight Is Hindsight or A Bowl of Fantasy" is a wise advice in an oustanding composition.

Keep writing, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi Bendavi

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

Paul, Most folks thinks that if chili and stew doesn't burn the hair off your tongue it isn't good,,looks to me like those next morning affects would detour their thinking but so far it never has! Great write Paul! Lisa

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

I have never eaten a bowl of chili that was too hot for my taste, but this was some spicy fun, Thanks Paul.

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

LOL

a testamonial to an old family recipe
cleverly crafted

good write

john+

ps pass the bread!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

Oh my Gosh!!! Paul!! Thank you for a hot laugh. The rhyme and flow are great also.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

Humor with a BANG!!
paul...you are a funny man. Thanks for this mornings grin!
Susan