Crane Sunset (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 10, 2004

Delightful! You paint a vivid picture of your Cranes. They played a big role already in Greek lore..I've never seen one.

Gina

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2004

beautiful poetry the imagery is outstanding William!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2004

Excellant write.

Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr

Reviewed on July 10, 2004

thank you for this great trip you took me on the cranes and sunset here,
love nature and you took us right into a nature in a pure form
Tommy

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 10, 2004

I love watching cranes strutting around, especially silently wading in shallows; something majestic about them.

Love this poem, too, William!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 10, 2004

Awesome imagery in this poem William!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 10, 2004

Beautiful sunset, Bill, very imaginable...ed

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on July 9, 2004

Beautiful write.

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on July 9, 2004

Great imagery! The flow and rythym is excellent....well done, William.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 9, 2004

Now this was beautiful William, loved the wonderful imagery in this poem!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on July 9, 2004

>>>>>Cloudy heavens, laying an egg
great image. you took me into this scene rather than just offering a solid description - the mark of a true pro!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2004

I could see and hear your cranes
wonderful poetry.........

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 9, 2004

Spectacular poetry William. I love this poem!Bravo!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 9, 2004

the mark of a true poet is the ability to recreate what he has seen or experiened by utilizing imagery and mood, allowing the reader to partake in the panorama of the poet's mind and soul and the world he has encounters ... you have excelled in doing so ...

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2004

And I must thank you, William, for writing this so beautifully, so boldly ("they stare back and ignore me") and with such a capturing of atmosphere... it's simply a marvelous view of what must have been a grand and somewhat humbling experience. Nature, itself, is like poetry... and you've enhanced it with flair. I saw it all! Great piece! katy xox.