As I swing, on a hammock
Lazily
Sipping on a tropical cocktail
Reminiscing melancholy thoughts
Of September days past
Cool breeze, surrounding me
As I walk
Through wooded scenes
The wonderful sounds
Of dry fallen leaves
Crackling, under my feet
As I walk recklessly
Without a care
Down a dirt trail
Watching
The leaves of multi hues
swirling, to their final destination
Cushioning the forest ground
For the coming, fragile snowflakes
My mind has no physical pain
Feelings as I see myself
There
But my body couldn't begin
To take, a first step
Without my trusted cane
As I am here
Trying to ease my pain.
By: William Bonilla
9/15/04
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Reviews of "Thoughts Of Autumn"
Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2004
Very sad write.
Touched me deeply.
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
A beautifully quiet poem, William, perhaps why the "intrusion" of the cane upon your thoughts also provides a stark contrast in the piece... your writing here is nearly mystical... really lovely. katy xox.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
Such a pensive and soulful write. Touches the heart William.
William, Autumn seems to be the healing season for many. Something almost magical seems to stir within us when the greens fade and the brilliance of Fall bursts forward to see.
Truly beautiful write, it was a stroll we all could enjoy.
Very well done, William. Exceptional imagery, use of both visual and aural. Also, the piece moves beyond the purely existential to a sense of loss in independence and mobility as well as vulnerability to which many of us can relate.
Explore the mystery of how nature makes unexpected gifts of creative wonders to an unsuspecting caregiver one late night and early morning in southeastern Georgia, USA.
Touched me deeply.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in toasty texas, karen lynn. :)
sueb
Ahh the magic of nature..
Truly beautiful write, it was a stroll we all could enjoy.
Lisa
Hope you feel better soon William!!
Nice to take a "mind" walk... I do that all the time!!
love Tinka
Excellent verse William.......
I wanted to be there...till the end
but alas, I suppose we all have to grow old sometime
Beautiful imagery and very well written, thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.
warm hugs
Elga
pax A