She Babbles Away (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on January 18, 2008

I can hear the brook through your poem. Great imagery...
Cryssa

Reviewed on January 12, 2008

Sounds wonderful love the imagery presented in "She Babbles Away"
Another relaxing write of yours something I could paint or photograph it sure seems.

Take care SEMPER FI,
~Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on January 1, 2008

William you made me close my eyes to the beautiful sounds of the babbling brook, Thank you and a Happy and Healthy New Year to you.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Sheri Uy

Reviewed on December 31, 2007

What a refreshing piece! Excellent imagery. Happy New Year to you and your loved ones.

Be well,
Sheri

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on December 31, 2007

Gorgeous images that just carried me along that beautiful stream. Nice work, William.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)

Reviewed on December 31, 2007

. . nothing like the water. ..
cascading over rocks and hearts alike. .
beautiful capturing
ness

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 31, 2007

The kind of music I enjoy the most, and wishing you a wondrous New Year filled with wondrous music, my friend.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 30, 2007

William, the beauty of a babbling brook beautifully captured by you!
Thanks for sharing!

Happy New Year,
Eileen

Reviewed by Joyce Devenish

Reviewed on December 30, 2007

If this isn't fiction I think you are very lucky. I really get much pleasure from nature and I have been blessed. However I would love a spring like this close-by. Good work...Joyce

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on December 30, 2007

Everyone is writing about Spring?
I don't believe winter has started yet?
Your writing is superb though.
Have a Prosperous, Healthy, New Year in Spring of 2008
and all the other days...
Ron

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on December 30, 2007

...to the tune of water...your pen becomes visual music to our ears.
Thank you William...this is well done...
John

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on December 30, 2007

It is times like this when babbling is a good thing. Well done.

Walt

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on December 30, 2007

William, a beautiful nature poem, just my type..I was just saying this morning as I got into my car, I cannot believe how flowing the brook right in my backyard is this morning. I bet we heard this babbling at the same time today! Pretty eerie, don't you think..
Much love, light and peace to you my dear friend,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 30, 2007

This is close to my heart, William. There is a brook just down the lane here that is born of a spring farther up the mountain. It always has water even in the driest summer; sustenance for the deer and such. In winter and spring, it babbles as does yours. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on December 30, 2007

A most outstanding write my friend, the imagery is excellent...I could envision the snow slowly melting and the creek waters swiftly rushing over the stones....one of my favorites thus far, well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on December 30, 2007

I hear the stream and long for the forests where this is serene for me too. What a visual!
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 30, 2007

Such a beautiful imagery in this one.......thank you for sharing your babbling brook today..it flowed like love blood through my veins!!!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on December 30, 2007

William, I too, love the sound of a babbling brook, I can sit for hours just enjoying the songs it sings and write words to songs or music...it soothe's the soul and clears the mind. I too, often wonder where its pathway leads to and how I would love to travel the route. Your poetry puts joy in my thoughts and makes me feel energy & love.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on December 30, 2007

There is nothing quite like the melody of a babbling brook as it sings its way down stream...beautiful poem, William
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on December 30, 2007

Awesome rolling clear water down stream
Sounds like the perfect nature
Melody to inspired the muse and the soul
And this stunning write!!
Wishing you and your family an abundance of blessings
Peace Love and Joy....for The New Year ....Morning Star

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors

Reviewed on December 30, 2007

Nice! Surprising content after the title. . .it reminds me of Thomas Hardy's nature poems. Thank you for a beautiful start to my day, William. Eileen

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on December 30, 2007

Nature sings ,, I am sure this is a beautiful winter sight,,,

Happy New Year William

Christine

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on December 30, 2007

William,

Only for you, a beautiful melody she plays...beautiful babbling brook! :) Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, and Happy New Year,

Karla.