The One That Got Away (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on March 10, 2010

LIKE THE FISH...ONE OFTEN IS BLESSED ENOUGH TO ESCAPE THE NET OF A BAD CIRCUMSTANCE AND RECEIVE ANOTHER CHANCE AT LIFE HOWEVER, ONE SHOULD NEVER THINK THE PREDATOR IS GONE...BUT WAITS...FOR ANOTHER CHANCE. I LOVE THE IMAGERY IN THIS GREAT WRITE. ENJOYED AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on November 26, 2008

VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on November 22, 2008

Makes me think a lot about fate, William. Well done! Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

Metaphors with lots of meaning within these alluring lines, William. Well done, indeed!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

Such is life..
Fine writing William

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

One lucky fishy i'd say...lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

For a moment I thought that you were referring to...oh! never mind...

Georg

PS: man shouldn't tease his fellow men!

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

Beautifully painted words.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

A piece with much real and metaphorical significance. Well done Wm.

~W~

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

I love watching loons fishing, too; and like us, sometimes those wily fish do get away from them. Watching an osprey fishing is also quite spectacular.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

And you were there to view it all...lovely writing.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

thought you lost your catch William from reading the title, anyway cool poem

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on November 19, 2008

Peacefully day dreaming. That's how I picture you as you came up with this gem.
A beauty, indeed.
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on November 19, 2008

This is really unique William.... Enjoyed!
Love, Christine

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller

Reviewed on November 19, 2008

It's not only us humans who have "The one that got away" stories.
Or is it?
Enjoyed this beautiful piece.
Smile--RaeLynn

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on November 19, 2008

what a gift to watch this unfold-enjoyed!

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 19, 2008

Quite lovely William, blessings Holly

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on November 19, 2008

very nice William, you are so diverse..Love your style and appreciation of nature.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on November 19, 2008

Visual masterpiece, William. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on November 19, 2008

The picture you painted with this write allowed every reader including myself to see and be there with you watching as the sonnet continued until we all saw it get away. That's the true mark of a poet. Well done William. Love and hugs, Bonnie