A Spider Dances (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 29, 2014

Succinct but powerful in meaning evoked. Nicely done, William. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Dark Knight

Reviewed on May 28, 2014

Yes the struggle for words is a common problem for many writers

Reviewed by Mary Cochrane

Reviewed on May 27, 2014

You say it best. As a poet, sometimes we do struggle for words.
Mary

Reviewed by lois christensen

Reviewed on May 27, 2014

So true of thinking about writing poetry, blocks do come with the webs surrounding it!

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on May 27, 2014

well done

Reviewed by Clarence Prince

Reviewed on May 27, 2014

The spider, as it has a moth for supper, it does its happy dance!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 26, 2014

a muse weaves its own special web ... what it captures is nature's force and creative perspective ...

Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley

Reviewed on May 26, 2014

How often do all of us have difficulty expressing words...
Rather funny though William, the spider also represents
change...
Perhaps that's why you made the comparison :)

Love and Light,
Lily

Reviewed by DM Yates (Reader)

Reviewed on May 26, 2014

oh my. It gave me a chuckle because you've described this so well. Perfect just the way it is.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on May 26, 2014

All those vegetables have ruined your imagination. ;-) And a spider dances the dance of life because its victims allows it to lay many eggs and have many baby spiders.

Ron

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on May 26, 2014

Yes, this about describes "writer's block". I can feel the moth's struggle. At least the Poet usually breaks free. Great write!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by audrine max

Reviewed on May 26, 2014

succinct, concise, well written

Reviewed by E Phillips

Reviewed on May 26, 2014

The complexities of life in a glance.
Well done!
Ed

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras

Reviewed on May 26, 2014

...a struggle that you've
won brilliantly!

Reviewed by D.T. de Bruijn

Reviewed on May 25, 2014

Very nice analogy! Sometimes it can indeed feel like that. But, as Sandie said, usually words come fairly easy, thank God! Well written, thank you. Greetings, D.T.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on May 25, 2014

Aaaahhhh!!!! A poet should not have trouble with words, since most are coming from their hearts. LOL!!!

Seems to me there are a lot of spiders lovers here amongst my friends. Yes, spiders are lovable creatures. It's amazing how they can build their webs. They're like little geometric engineers.

Cute write!

Sandie :o)