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The First Hunt
by William Bonilla → (All Poetry by William Bonilla)
Friday, October 19, 2018    Rated "G" by the Author.
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The first hunt

I thought I loved
The art of the hunt
But in my first ever hunt
I at 19 my first kill
was a muskrat.

A shotgun shotgun
Was my choice of weapon
didn’t kill him with the first shot
I wounded it,
he ran into a drainage ditch
under a road.

I knelt in search of him
saw him clinching his tiny paws
in pain with eyes shut tight
as if in prayer trembling.

I couldn’t take the kill shot,
a companion did
that was my first and final hunt
never again did I
ever wandered into the woods
Armed
For another hunt.

By: William Bonilla
D’Artagnan
10/19/2018

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 Reviews of "The First Hunt"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on December 2, 2018
I UNDERSTAND COMPLETELY WILLIAM. PERHAPS IN SELF-DEFENSE YOU WOULD, BUT IN THE CASE WHERE YOU HAVE TO HUNT DOWN AND KILL A PREY...YOUR HEART WAS NOT MADE TO ENJOY KILLING...ANYTHING...THAT WAY. THIS IS A VERY GOOD THING THAT YOU LEARNED ABOUT YOURSELF VERY EARLY IN LIFE AND OBVIOUSLY...NEVER FORGOT. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Susanne Leist
Reviewed on October 25, 2018
The poor animal. Nothing deserves that pain. I'm happy you left hunting behind.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on October 22, 2018

powerful


never stop writing!

m

Reviewed by Rosemary Bonilla
Reviewed on October 22, 2018
Hello William don't mean to intrude but I have a question I would like to ask you, do you have children? If so what is your oldest child's name?

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 21, 2018
I can see how you felt about it. It is always important when hunting to make a clean kill and make sure that you eat what you kill. Although I never ate the hundreds of mice that I killed before I was 15. My friends trapped muskrat for their fur and not their food. I never saw a muskrat or killed one.

One day when I was at our city park with a power plant and cooling pond that never froze in winter and stayed quite warm year-round. All I had was my slingshot and marbles. I rarely went to the power plant side because it was ugly, but the side by the zoo was where we would fish for legendary sized bluegills, bullheads and the occasional northern. This winter day I was hunting a rumored mink that was reportedly in the pond.

Suddenly, the mink came out of the water and hopped up on a wooden platform about 30 feet away from me that served a purpose I didn't know. I put a marble in my slingshot and fired away. To my surprise, the marble hit the mink squarely in his forehead. I thought I killed him. Instead, he shook his head as if to tell me that he had a terrible headache, and dove into a pipe in the platform. I don't know if he died later or not.

Later after doing it, I did regret digging out two half grown foxes and killing them. But in those days, foxes were considered bad because farmers lost chickens to them.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on October 20, 2018
I can relate to this. I've never hunted, or shot an animal. I have no problem with someone hunting for food, but to kill something just for the sport of it is wrong.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on October 20, 2018
My first and only "hunt" was a redbird trying to find food on a snow covered ground. It wasn't dead either. I did shoot it to get it out of its ain. I never hunted again.p

Reviewed on October 20, 2018
You had empathy for the small animal, scared and wounded. I admire that.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 19, 2018
Good on you for finding out early in life that you were not cut out to hunt, just step up to the plate and bunt...:) -e-

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on October 19, 2018
This says something about the child that later became the man. Fine work.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on October 19, 2018
That must have been a scary experience. I would have been scared too if I were you.

Sandie


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