The American dream, a dream come true
To retire, to finally relax
To own your home,
He sat with happy thoughts
At his new patio
A dog day afternoon
One Hundred degrees plus
Old Major, his best friend
For fifteen years, a German Shepherd
Slowly walked over to him
Collasped, exhasutedly, by his feet
Ok buddy, said his master
I'll fix your lunch. and be done.
He walks away
Thoughts still circulating, in his head
Boy! am I lucky
Bought a new home
In a gated community
What a great new concept
"Live bordering the wilderness"
To mingle with nature
As it unfolds, it's secrets
So. hawked the developers,
Sales persons and builders.
As he was mixing, the dog food
At a distance, He thought he heard
A wounded dog, yelping
Thought nothing of it
Continue to vision his dreams
All his new house options
Were being honored
He was, as happy
As a pig eating shit.
No more hustle, rat race
Rushing and running for a bus
No more police,
Fire and Ambulance sirens
Constantly blurring
No more emergency dial
He had selected and paid extra
For a plot over looking, the wilderness
Behind his property
It was contracted, that section
Will forever stay natural
Where nature, will unfold herself.
When he returned, to feed his dog
Only the rear half of Major
Laid in a pool of blood
As he caught sight
Of a twenty foot rouge Alligator
Lumbering back to the swamp
The hell, that spat him out
Within the grasp, of his massive jaws
Was the front half of Major
Limped as a wet rag
As the monster slowly returned
To the natural Swamp
"His Piece Of The American Pie."
By: William Bonilla
2/06/04
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Reviews of "Piece Of The Pie"
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2004
My gosh this is original and unique and quite chilling, William!
This says a lot about life and our food chain. Some survive and keep fighting and some are fodder for stomachs. This says a great deal about living in today's world and what is sacred and what is not.
Super American poem.
Love,
Susan
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2004
Oh my...I didn't expect that at the ending..I hope its your
great imagination and not true or you wont be having many
cook outs William..Unless its alligator barbecue...
great write...Floria
William, I lived in south Florida near the Everglades and I can attest that this happens many times each year. Your tale was chilling and I hope it was from your imagination, and not part of your own personal reality.
You've struck a nerve here, William. Chilling tale, but becoming more and more real as we continue to invade our nonhuman neighbors' domains building subdivisions in wetlands, swamps, forests, and other wilderness areas. Will we ever learn? Will we ever be content to share?
For heaven's sakes don't let the grandchildren out to play! What a nightmare!
Very well penned William..but I'm almost certain I'll have nightmars of my own now. Poor Major! Lisa
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Super American poem.
Love,
Susan
great imagination and not true or you wont be having many
cook outs William..Unless its alligator barbecue...
great write...Floria
Excellent but frightening...
...Michael
Very well penned William..but I'm almost certain I'll have nightmars of my own now. Poor Major! Lisa
What a piece of pie/horror at the end!!
Real bad twist at the end!!
Love Tinka
a piece of that pie this is
very well written William.....
Reindeer