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A Real War
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(Make no mistake, for your own sake, this is a fight, as real as any battle sight.)

McDonald's


Burger King


Wendy's


And every other fast food, slow food joint where you shouldn't be with you high blood pressure and high cholestrol.


Got to fight for control


Before your body does fold


It's a battle that's very hard to win


Cause eating sure makes us grin


I'm fighting this war right now


After all the years of being able to eat almost anything it's kind of hard to give up the chow


I love eating all types of food


And some greasy junk sure is good


I've always been able to eat what I want


Now my doctor says don't


Everytime I get on the weight scale


There's a story to tell


A story of a swelling bigger tail


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 Reviews of "A Real War"
Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on May 26, 2003
Hi Grady,
Thanks for the smile...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2003
OH Grady,
Make stirfry with those healthy veggies... This is bad and would be a fight having to rechange thinking, appetite,and old habits... grinning at Tonys comment..
{hugs love ya Gem}
Please do take it easy..
Lady Peg

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on May 26, 2003
Grady,,,There comes that time in each one's life! And to think... We pay those Drs our hard earned money to tell us, what we don't ever wanna hear! *grin* Hang in there, It gets better! Lisa

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2003
Hey Grady, This was funny.
Doctors always tell us that crap. If God did not want us to eat hamburgers, he would not have created cattle. Thanks for the Gem!


yf
tony

Reviewed on May 26, 2003
LOL!...Yes, watch out Grady!...or you'll be bigger than your mother-in-law!...Heeeheee!

Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by L. Kolenich (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2003
That stuff that's the worst for us tastes the best! This is real....fun.


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