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Man-O-War
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Just kick me
Out
And over
Tell me again you don’t like me
That I bore you
That you hate me
That I suck the air right out of you
All without ever knowing the reach of my powers
To set you free

So go on
Struggle again
Reboot
Restart
Trade in
Buy new
Just screw
It
And you

Search for another shell
Just don’t step on the
Man-o-war
Those 10 foot tentacles
Can really sting the unaware


* This is just a poem, so try not to get all happy on me.

 
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Reviewed by Gary Gebert
Reviewed on January 22, 2004
Ouch! I think I've been stung once or twice or maybe thrice. Seen them and don't want to mess with them!

P.S. I like you (can never be too careful) LOL!!!

Gary
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on January 20, 2004
(((sara)))

only a poem, but one that stings OUCH felt the venom in your words

hope things improve--man o' wars nothing to mess with

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :(
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on January 20, 2004
These man o' wars are nothin' to mess with; this poem made me think of "Finding Nemo", when Dorrie the fish got stung by some jellyfish, and she was on the brink of dying before Marlin saved her; and it also made me think of the jellyfish on "Spongebob Squarepants"! LOL I am NOT trying to be funny, but this was what I though when I saw your poem! LOL

Still, a very good write; I hope I never meet a Man O'War...I just may regret it...LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 19, 2004
Well written Sara!!

Well if this was my poem it would of been for real!!

been beaten up again...body and soul!!

May I become you housekeeper?

ptomise i will only use one computer at a time.....you can have the others...lol!!

Welcome home girl!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on January 19, 2004
Swimming with sharks are we?
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on January 19, 2004
I hate those things.....they're like Queensland's Box Jellyfish........brrrrrrr!

A great poem Sara.....very strong writing...bamn...right down the page.

Ty, Dani
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 19, 2004
Glad you put the footnote in, Sara. And although it's 'just a poem'it's very good!
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on January 19, 2004
This relationship is on an even keel, but do I detect distant storm warnings? LOL Love the lines, "Just screw, It, And you"
Best regards,
Leland
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